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Life Is Like a Maypole

Grab a hold and take a spin You destiny shall begin Hang on tight With all your might You’ll want to reach The very end Pick any color you desire Red, yellow, pink or even saffire The pink ribbon sends you flying high The blue and yellow can’t touch the sky The dance will begin And as you spin Your color will entwine With other colors of your life to make it so devine. You will laugh and spin And do it again You will fall and cry And wonder why Your life is like a maypole A dance with colors of the sky This wonderful dance of colors Entwined with all the others Is a journey that you must begin Until you reach the very end 02/08/2015

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Skat A

Date: 2/16/2015 5:59:00 PM

Janet, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win **SKAT**

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/16/2015 7:10:00 PM

Thank you Skat:)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/16/2015 3:24:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/16/2015 4:22:00 PM

Thank you Debbie, it was fun to write. Janet

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 2/16/2015 11:49:00 AM

You are the topper Janet. CONGRATS. Love

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/16/2015 12:28:00 PM

Thank you Rajat. A surprise indeed:)

Jan Allison

Date: 2/16/2015 11:46:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Janet a well deserved top spot:-) Hugs Jan xx

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/16/2015 12:29:00 PM

Thank you Jan, it was truly a great surprise.

Seren Roberts

Date: 2/16/2015 9:44:00 AM

Congratulations Janet on your winning entry to my contest....Thank you ......Seren

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/16/2015 10:26:00 AM

Thank you Seren, Such an honor.

Darkland Poetry

Date: 2/11/2015 8:55:00 PM

Great job on your maypole creation. I enjoyed the read. :)

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/12/2015 10:32:00 AM

Thank you Rachel.

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/9/2015 3:33:00 PM

Awesome rhythm in your Maypole dance, Janet. I can feel the joy and optimism in the colors and spin. Best wishes in the contest. Sandra

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/9/2015 3:35:00 PM

Thank you Sandra

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/9/2015 2:44:00 PM

Good flow, rhythm, and rhyme in these couplets..Enjoyed reading your work.. A good contest entry..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/9/2015 3:33:00 PM

Thank you Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/9/2015 6:11:00 AM

- Sounds like a beautiful dance ..... The Dance of Life - A wonderful poem, a great flow in your rhyme - I wish you best of luck in contest, Janet ! - // Anne-Lise :)

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/9/2015 6:23:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise.

Robert Lindley

Date: 2/8/2015 9:31:00 PM

Never danced around the maypole but have hit the floor with some mighty fine ladies in my time. And each one was a jewel to behold , dressed so very fine! Excellently crafted write my friend. A solid 7 from me..

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/9/2015 5:26:00 AM

What wonderful words coming from such a talented poet. Thank you Robert.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/8/2015 7:56:00 PM

Your lovely poem reminds me of the colors of the chakras in our auras. Blending, weaving throughout our lives. A wonderful entry for the contest Janet! 7

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/8/2015 8:15:00 PM

Thank you Connie

Jan Allison

Date: 2/8/2015 6:59:00 PM

beautiful colourful rhyme Janet - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/8/2015 7:18:00 PM

Dont worry janet it is probably because I posted my comment when you were replying to Dorian and it jumps up to the next post. Simply go to your 'my outboxes' section and you can delete the comments in the wrong place. What i do is 'cut' the comment - got to my out box and delete it then go back to the poem and 'paste' it in the right box:-) Hugs jan xx

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/8/2015 7:02:00 PM

Thank you jan, sorry I think my post to Dorian ended up on you. Must be my blonde showing through:). Thanks. Hugs to you jan. Janet

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/8/2015 6:26:00 PM

Very nice pen, Janet! Enjoyed reading your piece, my dear friend. A 7 from me! In His light! God bless! :) Love n hugs! xxx D."

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/8/2015 7:03:00 PM

Dorian. Thank you so very much so glad you enjoyed. Love and hugs back at you. Janet