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Life Is Like A Maypole

I'll weave my thoughts into dreams of glory. Just maybe I'll inspire with my story. This journey long on a pebbled road. Still the view makes light this uphill load. Now I see skies of azure blue. Plenty of beauty to see me through. Come with me and promenade. Step out from the gloomy shade. We shall skip to a brand new beat. No desolation or defeat. Fingers of joy cascade from above. A marvelous dance of genuine love! written February 7th,2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 2/16/2015 5:50:00 PM
Deb, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win **SKAT**
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Date: 2/16/2015 11:57:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Deb:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/16/2015 10:52:00 AM
Thank you Deb for your entry and congratulations ...Seren
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Date: 2/7/2015 7:28:00 PM
Beautifully penned with lovely imagery I love the final couplet Debs:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/7/2015 9:13:00 AM
Life is like a is love! Your 'dreams of glory' are inspiring! gl in the contest. // paul
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Date: 2/7/2015 9:06:00 AM
Reads like a winner..Way to go for the contest..We do become woven into life don't we and that can be good or bad..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 2/7/2015 8:10:00 AM
your last couplet is a wow.. :)
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Date: 2/7/2015 6:59:00 AM
Your verses a cascade of love from above/ That come to rest in the heart like a dove! Inspiring, tender and uplifting, dear Deb. Wish you happiness in love!
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Date: 2/7/2015 6:52:00 AM
Your poem Deb is "A marvelous dance of genuine love" and has helped me "Step out from the gloomy shade" of day to day living a real festive maypole.Love>>>rajat
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Date: 2/7/2015 6:33:00 AM
- Deb, this lifts me "into dreams of glory" .... a beautiful poem - I wish you best of luck in the contest - a 7 from me - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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