Deb Wilson Poet Couplet

Life Is Like a Maypole

I'll weave my thoughts into dreams of glory.
Just maybe I'll inspire with my story.

This journey long on a pebbled road.
Still the view makes light this uphill load.

Now I see skies of azure blue.
Plenty of beauty to see me through.

Come with me and promenade.
Step out from the gloomy shade.

We shall skip to a brand new beat.
No desolation or defeat.

Fingers of joy cascade from above.
A marvelous dance of genuine love!



written February 7th,2015

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Skat A February 16, 2015 at 5:50 PM Deb, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win **SKAT**

Jan Allison February 16, 2015 at 11:57 AM Dropping back with my congrats Deb:-) Hugs Jan xx

Seren Roberts February 16, 2015 at 10:52 AM Thank you Deb for your entry and congratulations ...Seren

Jan Allison February 7, 2015 at 7:28 PM Beautifully penned with lovely imagery I love the final couplet Debs:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus February 7, 2015 at 9:13 AM Life is like a maypole...so is love! Your 'dreams of glory' are inspiring! gl in the contest. // paul

Sara Kendrick February 7, 2015 at 9:06 AM Reads like a winner..Way to go for the contest..We do become woven into life don't we and that can be good or bad..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 7, 2015 at 8:10 AM your last couplet is a wow.. :)

Demetrios Trifiatis February 7, 2015 at 6:59 AM Your verses a cascade of love from above/ That come to rest in the heart like a dove! Inspiring, tender and uplifting, dear Deb. Wish you happiness in love!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 7, 2015 at 6:52 AM Your poem Deb is "A marvelous dance of genuine love" and has helped me "Step out from the gloomy shade" of day to day living a real festive maypole.Love>>>rajat

Anne-Lise Andresen February 7, 2015 at 6:33 AM - Deb, this lifts me "into dreams of glory" .... a beautiful poem - I wish you best of luck in the contest - a 7 from me - hugs // Anne-Lise :)