Jerry Swana Poet Pantoum

Life Is Full Circle

My eyes see the sun rise in the east, then set in the west.
It let's me know I have another day left.
To me money means nothing, time is forever priceless.
The truth is what hurts, lies are confessed.

It gets harder to breathe the closer you get to the edge.
It let's me know I have another day left.
The truth is what hurts, lies are confessed
Thought after thought my mind is a mess.

It gets harder to breathe the closer you get to the edge.
To me money means nothing, time is forever priceless.
Thought after thought my mind is making a mess
My eyes see the sun rise in the east, then set in the west.

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Emile Pinet March 12, 2015 at 3:51 PM Thoughts are poured out and tumble freely to the next one with a cascading effect of warm thoughts. Emile. Jerry Swana March 16, 2015 at 12:09 AM Thank youu :) its means a lot that you see my heart's expression

Jan Allison March 12, 2015 at 3:41 PM Brilliantly written Gerald - very wise words indeed - I have never tried this form before - love the power of the repeated lines:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx Jerry Swana March 16, 2015 at 12:10 AM Jan :) you're input means the world to me thank you XOXOX <3