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Written on January 4, 2024

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Life is a Song

"Life is a song in which everyone makes up the keys and harmony as they sing along." - Mitta Xinindlu In rhythms of light, softly glowing Bringing the night a glimpse of serenity, Feelings abiding in the soul, feelings of joy, Feelings of love… In patterns of laughter, softly flowing Bringing the spirit a gentling, a stirring, Beautiful beyond comparing, beauty so rare, Beauty in a heart who cares… In beats of breathless wonder, music knowing Bringing the still, hushed breath a lovely hope, Hope that colors the world in hues of gold, Golden dreams, so life seems… Life is a song, with so many tempos and cadences, Singing of the miracles, the prayers, the clarity, Love so remarkable it can’t be spoken, only known, By hearts who hear the music… Beneath the rhythmic melody of light and love, The brilliance of a ballad sung for hearts who delight, In the magnificent only God could have authored, The song of life’s cadenced insight… Insight into the love that comes from knowing – Wherever this song is sung, there is light that dazes, Amazing the heart, the soul, the one who hears… The music of this song, as life dances on and on, Despite its fears – Yes, despite its fears… Life is a Song!
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Ashley Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 8:53 PM
Dear Gina, your exquisite poem cascades with beautiful imagery of expressive gratitude for life and its prayerful song. Congratulations for your success in Kai’s contest. Wonderful to share the podium with you my sweet poet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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January 15, 2024 at 2:21 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Empress Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 4:58 AM
Dear Gina! This is so mellifluous and so lyrically pleasing, i love how you’ve expressed and phrased your thoughts in such eloquence ensuring your lines flow well together. Excellent quote also to begin your poem with and i love the finishing lines too. But every word in this piece is soul touching! Fitting for the prompt! Well done on your win: congratulations
Hawley Avatar
January 5, 2024 at 4:24 PM
"The music of this song, as life dances on and on, Despite its fears –" Great message there. I assume this is for the contest so good luck, this should place, I'd think at least.
One Avatar
January 4, 2024 at 11:10 AM
The use of imagery in this poem is exquisite. The rhythms of light, softly glowing, and the patterns of laughter, softly flowing create a vivid and enchanting picture. The metaphors seamlessly convey the emotions and sensations associated with life's moments... I loved it..
Brotherton Avatar
January 4, 2024 at 9:51 AM
An amazing poem, my friend. I hope it is a happy tune.
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