Balveen Cheema Poet Tanka

Life Is a Puzzle

No matter how hard 
one tries to make his travel
of life a haven
the flowers of happiness
is a puzzle sans reward





December 20, 2015
Contest: Life Is A Puzzle
Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron

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Sandra Haight December 29, 2015 at 10:18 PM Nicely done, Balveen. Congratulations on your win in Nayda's contest. Hugs, Sandra Balveen Cheema January 2, 2016 at 3:12 AM Thanks Sandra and Season's Greetings for 2016

Skat A December 29, 2015 at 9:49 PM Balveen, Congratulations on your win... SKAT Balveen Cheema January 2, 2016 at 3:12 AM Thanks Skat!

Pandita Sietesantos December 29, 2015 at 8:16 PM Hi Balveen, life is indeed a puzzle! But this great Tanka has put the pieces together! Congratulations, my friend, on a well-deserved win! Pandita Balveen Cheema January 2, 2016 at 3:14 AM Thanks Pandita for your praises! A happy n prosperous new year!

Andrea Dietrich December 29, 2015 at 5:22 PM Congrats on your win, Balveen. Balveen Cheema January 2, 2016 at 3:15 AM Thanks Andrea!

Susan Gentry December 29, 2015 at 5:13 PM Excellent Tanka. Congratulations. Balveen Cheema January 2, 2016 at 3:24 AM Susan, thanks and season's greetings! Balveen Cheema January 2, 2016 at 3:16 AM Susan, thanks and season's greetings!

Jan Allison December 29, 2015 at 3:10 PM Many congrats Balveen this was quite a challenge:-) hugs Jan xx Balveen Cheema January 2, 2016 at 3:20 AM Thanks Jan ! Surprisingly it went off with ease!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores December 29, 2015 at 3:00 PM Congratulations on the placement of the contest Balveen. Balveen Cheema January 2, 2016 at 3:25 AM Thanks Nayda and wishing you a prosperous year ahead!

Funom Makama December 24, 2015 at 7:37 AM when the rains fall, they will feel so warm even in cold if they are poured through your lines. You are superb, fantastic and just wow! Its nice I visited this page. Compliments of the season dear poet! Balveen Cheema December 24, 2015 at 7:42 AM Overwhelmed! Thanks for your praises and visit!

Andrea Dietrich December 20, 2015 at 8:39 PM well done, Balveen! Balveen Cheema December 21, 2015 at 7:01 AM Thanks Andrea!