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Life is a poem in itself

Youth Born. A new book to open Hundred blank pages of promises A life yet to write. Elder Awaken. Find the life has taken flight Provide only slightly time To leave behind a mark, a footprint. Dead Silence. Last word had written. A poem of life framed in memories The journey has ended.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/11/2013 10:39:00 PM
an excellent "talking to yourself" winning poem.... Congratulations, always & forever ~ Linda
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Date: 7/11/2013 9:18:00 PM
Congratulations.......a beautiful summary of all stages and the metaphor is perfection
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Date: 7/11/2013 9:12:00 AM
Wow, this is unique and well penned. Congrats on your well deserved win. AO
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Date: 7/9/2013 10:59:00 AM
Shirley congrats on your fine win. Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/9/2013 11:34:00 AM
Thank you Connie...congratulations on your win on some other contest too.. I love your poem.. *Hug
Date: 7/6/2013 8:47:00 AM
Its called creation beautifully worded, my friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/6/2013 9:13:00 AM
Thank you for droping by and leave a nice comment on my poem, BL.. really appreciate it ..^_^
Date: 7/6/2013 12:43:00 AM
Such strong perspective here. It's so relieving to see you writing again! You were missed! :)
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Drake Eszes
Date: 7/6/2013 7:20:00 AM
I couldn't agree more. And, HELL YEAH, you've been missed!!!!!!! *HUGE INTERNET HUG* :)
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Date: 7/6/2013 1:54:00 AM
I feel that PS has become such a sanctuary for me, Drake. Though I'm not writing, I always spent time every day to read couples of poems. Oh you made me smile here.. its glad to know I've been missed. *hug*
Date: 7/5/2013 11:45:00 PM
wow, it's quite deep and thought provoking, nice job, Shirley!!
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Date: 7/5/2013 11:55:00 PM
Thank you for the kind review, Jag. I'm glad you like it. :)) And oh...sorry for the miss-placed reply below..it's my reply to Linda..LOL
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Shirley Candy
Date: 7/5/2013 11:52:00 PM
I couldn't be more agree with you, Linda. Yes..I think every step and all choices we made in life, will end up as a poem by God. Thank you for stopping by and leave a comment..very appreciate it.. *hug*
Date: 7/5/2013 11:27:00 PM
wow...i had a story plotted at mind one time... playing with the world how we are all a poem, and written by God, in all dramatic forms... lol... a perfect 7.... very creative... deep meaning, LINDA
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Shirley Candy
Date: 7/5/2013 11:53:00 PM
I couldn't be more agree with you, Linda. Yes..I think every step and all choices we made in life, will end up as a poem by God. Thank you for stopping by and leave a comment..very appreciate it.. *hug*