Life is a Journey

Sometimes the light's all shining on me
Other times I can barely see
Lately it occurs to me
What a long strange trip it's been, 

 from Truckin by The Dead

Life is a Journey

Life is a long journey with
high hills and deep valleys.
Day after day one foot
in front of another.

Dark nights of deep depression,
offset by sunlit days of happiness.
Take one day at a time, and
accept what is my lot.

Failures, like impassable walls
block my way.
Success provides the path
around them.

People appear along the road
to accompany me.
Some for a short time and
others for the whole trip.

Sometimes people
act as my guide.
Other times they seek
to hinder me.

Many times, I walk alone
with only myself to rely on.
Sometimes I am surprised
and other times not.

In my golden years, I look back
at the road I have travelled.
Sometimes, I laugh, other
times I cry.

The Dead were right.
It has been a long strange trip!

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Date: 1/31/2025 6:59:00 PM
You and the Dead got that right, what a long, strange trip it's been! You do a great job of describing the opposites of life...a long, strange trip, but overall, I'd say it's worth the ride!
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 1/31/2025 7:22:00 PM
Thanks for your comments. I would also say it was worth it.
Date: 1/31/2025 12:50:00 PM
Life is a journey that should leads us to a higher maturity and higher goals with each step of the way. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 1/31/2025 12:58:00 PM
Yes it should. Thanks Sara
Date: 1/31/2025 10:27:00 AM
That last stanza pretty well sums it up for many of us. A very good read, Oliver.
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 1/31/2025 10:55:00 AM
Thanks Jim. Yes it does.
Date: 1/31/2025 10:26:00 AM
Hello Oliver, Yes life is a journey. We travel every day. It is a rough road to travel on. I am making this poem of yours my fav. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/31/2025 11:02:00 AM
hello Olvier, you are very welocme. I will and you enjoy yoour day to. /Darlene/
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 1/31/2025 10:55:00 AM
Well thank you Darlene, I appreciate that very much. Yes it is. Enjoy your day as well Oliver
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