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Life Is a Highway

We are all distant travellers In this world full of strangers, Journeying through valleys and plains Nor taking path on tops or sides of mountains. Each one of us has his own backpack As we follow a trail without turning back, When our feet sore and feel like giving up We will look for a ride that offers us a kind hop. Our journey does continuously go As we anticipate a place where we don’t know, However, this would never be the right thing to do Be certain, take a breath as we go through. If we cross our fingers and focus on our goal We possibly reach the place, the desires of our soul, If checkpoint stops us in any time of the day Smile! Then, we’ll travel smoothly and freely on life’s highway.
Written: Sept. 2,2012 Honorable Mention Contest: Rhyme Poem contest with the theme Life is..... (Title of Choices: Life is a Highway, Life is an Adventure, Life is a Dance) Contest Judged: 9/8/2012 12:00:00 AM Poet Sponsor: Kim Merryman
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Carrillo Avatar
January 4, 2013 at 8:25 AM
Leonora; Congratulations on your honorable mention on this one. I had not read it, but I'm glad I did. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
September 28, 2012 at 8:26 PM
Been a traveler all my life. Some of us wander endlessly without goals, some of us set our sights on specific goals. Either way, life's highway is filled with wonder and beauty.
A   Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 10:53 PM
Hi Leonora, a warm congratulations in KIM's "Life Is... " contest. Truly enjoyed stopping by to read all her winners~ glad this one made her list..:-) always* PD
Sweetheart Avatar
September 11, 2012 at 9:38 AM
many congrats Leonora on winning an HM for this incredible entry on Life luv .. a treasured journey ..
Brown Avatar
September 10, 2012 at 1:20 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest "Life Is" Leonora. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
September 10, 2012 at 7:02 AM
Hey, I see you won. AWESOME and big congrats. you look very young in your avatar!!!
Liwayway Avatar
September 9, 2012 at 8:18 AM
WOW!!! three wins in a row this week!!! so proud of you my dear friend Norie!! you deserve it!!CONGRATULATIONS!!cheers!!!!!!
May Avatar
September 8, 2012 at 6:45 PM
congrats on your win Leonora
Johnson Avatar
September 8, 2012 at 5:14 PM
Congratulations on a win with your great poem. Love, Joyce
Merryman Avatar
September 8, 2012 at 4:09 PM
Leonora, congrats on your Honorable Mention! An enjoyable read. Thank you for participating in my contest. Love, Kim
Scott Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 10:44 AM
A VERY GOOD INSIGHT IN TO ONE MOVING FORWARD NICE TITLE I DONT THINK THWERE IS ALWAYS A SMOOTH PATH THROUGH LIFE FUNNY I ALWAYS HAVE MY BACK PACK ON WHERE EVER I GO A BIT LIKE A COMFORT BLANKET FOR ME NICE TITLE ALSO I SEE PD HAS TOLD YOU TO VIEW MY TRAVELLING POEM I THINK YOURS IS MUCH BETTER MIKNE WAS SPARE OF THE MOMENT THING APROCHING DIFFERENT SUBJECT MATTER X DAVDSCOTT
Horsman Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 8:20 AM
Sure is, Leonora, but walking it with your beautiful poetry, sure makes life a better place to be.
A   Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 11:56 AM
The poem is called "tRAVELLING" by; david scott ........... you should read it... xox~LINDA
Gasun Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 4:45 PM
thank you very much, Linda.
A   Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 11:54 AM
Leonora, wow..this is the second poem i have read today, based on the same image.. and this and the other poem, talk about sore feet... How interesting right... I am so amazed on that..Really i am.. but the other poem i read today, was about traveling, and how the sores on the feet are a sign on he never gave up.. I love your poem.If you want to read the poem,, Look for a poet name DAVID SCOTT '' he's one of my good friends on this site.. I'm going to direct him here as well.. thank you PD
Gasun Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 4:44 PM
Thank you my friend for dropping by. Thanks for appreciating my poem and my view of life. Yes, i've read David Scott's poem and his outlook in life. We both find our ways how to make our journey in life easier despite the sore feet. Thank you very much for the your continuous support and inspiration. luv, leonora
Ellison Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 10:57 AM
Loved it! An extremely well written poem, my dear Leonora! (beautiful name)! Love and warm wishes, Jack
Gasun Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 4:38 PM
Thank you so much, Jack for loving my poem and name as well, lol! Nice to see you here. Best wishes always!
Palmer Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 10:49 AM
yes it is ,truly great ,love it Leonora
Gasun Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 4:37 PM
Thank you Richard for loving my poem.
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September 3, 2012 at 10:43 AM
A truely good poem Leonora. Yes it's true - but never thought of it that way.:) Have a great new week. oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Gasun Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 4:36 PM
Thank you Anne Lise for the precious time and for appreciating this little poem of mine. Have a great new week, too.
Dietrich Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 9:55 AM
boy life's highway can sure be a rocky climb, can't it, sweetie? I enjoyed this one and seeing how you did it on the highway theme. It will be interesting to see the most popular theme used. I have one on dance that I hope to post soon! good luck in the contest. Great job!
Gasun Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 4:50 PM
Yes it is my dear fiend, Andrea, we even travel on very rocky mountains and find a terrible feet sore; but we have to find our own way to make a smoother climb and never stop because life goes on. Thank you so much for dropping by and your inspirational comments and continuous support.
Ink-U-Script Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 1:57 AM
Beautifully written...excellent expression on life...so true!!!
Gasun Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 4:35 PM
Thank you pace for appreciating this poem of mine and my point of view about life.
Carrillo Avatar
September 2, 2012 at 7:23 PM
Wow! This is just awesome. What a way to write about the highway of life. I just loved it. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
Gasun Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 4:34 PM
Thank you Lucilla for appreciating my poem and point of view. :)
Liwayway Avatar
September 2, 2012 at 9:46 AM
Wow!!!!!!!!!!! wonderfully written my friend!! Congratulations!! and Goodluck!! :)
Gasun Avatar
September 2, 2012 at 9:51 AM
Thank you, Mary. I've just enter it tonight because I've talked to my mom and brother through skype for almost 3 hours.
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