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Life in Reverse

I have made plenty a mistake As my life went from bad to worse, But those mistakes I can't unmake Unless I live life in reverse.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/19/2024 1:48:00 PM

Who knows if that would be better…we just keep moving forward…can you imagine, though, if we could open doors and have redos.

David Crandall
Date: 7/19/2024 3:00:00 PM

Yep, live and move on, but I think there could be a lot of interesting stories about, what would have happened if....

Sand Blown

Date: 7/19/2024 1:06:00 PM

...mistakes....i've made a lot.....but now, old age has shelved them as irrationals of my 'time' back then.... ....my 'now' be more of a consistency of patterns within irrationals (some egs. be: pi and phi circles and spirals that be as ongoing time patterns as abstracts or actually perceived for a better 'now'.........stan

David Crandall
Date: 7/19/2024 2:58:00 PM

That is reminding me of my math classes!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/19/2024 11:12:00 AM

Hello David Crandall, I like your poem. I wonder if we can live im a life of reverse. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene//

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/20/2024 10:45:00 AM

Hello David Crandall, Oh second child hood! Oh! LOL! Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

David Crandall
Date: 7/19/2024 2:58:00 PM

Hi Darlene! Thanks. Maybe we can live life in reverse, since I'm in my second childhood. lol.