Life in Reverse

I have made plenty a mistake
As my life went from bad to worse,
But those mistakes I can't unmake 
Unless I live life in reverse.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Rodrigues Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 1:48 PM
Who knows if that would be better…we just keep moving forward…can you imagine, though, if we could open doors and have redos.
Crandall Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 3:00 PM
Yep, live and move on, but I think there could be a lot of interesting stories about, what would have happened if....
Blown Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 1:06 PM
...mistakes....i've made a lot.....but now, old age has shelved them as irrationals of my 'time' back then.... ....my 'now' be more of a consistency of patterns within irrationals (some egs. be: pi and phi circles and spirals that be as ongoing time patterns as abstracts or actually perceived for a better 'now'.........stan
Crandall Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 2:58 PM
That is reminding me of my math classes!
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 11:12 AM
Hello David Crandall, I like your poem. I wonder if we can live im a life of reverse. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene//
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 20, 2024 at 10:45 AM
Hello David Crandall, Oh second child hood! Oh! LOL! Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Crandall Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 2:58 PM
Hi Darlene! Thanks. Maybe we can live life in reverse, since I'm in my second childhood. lol.
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