Life In Motion

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Life in motion, we each cognise Why-for seeking outcome Ceasing to size, let’s vaporise Pathway to God’s kingdom Perfect geometry Tranquil serenity In continuity Celebration Life in motion 13-October-2011 Quietus

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Shirley Hawkins

Date: 10/13/2021 7:20:00 PM

Celebration, Life in motion..... A beautiful rhyme. Thank you, Take care...Shirley

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/13/2021 9:27:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by, Shirley :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/13/2021 1:34:00 AM

Life needs movement so long as it pleases the Lord. I would be grateful if you tell me what you think of my miserable quietus.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/13/2021 9:27:00 PM

Yours is a masterpiece!