Robert Stoner Jr Poet Verse

Life In a World Perfect

Life In A World Perfect

Life in
a world
perfect,
never
to feel
hunger.

Life in
a world
perfect,
never
to fear
thirst.

Life in
a world
perfect,
never
to be
homeless.

Life in 
a world
perfect,
basic
days need
fulfilled.

Life in
a world
perfect,
cannot
turn a 
blind eye.
 
Robert Gene Stoner Jr ©
12/7/16

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Alexis Y. December 11, 2016 at 5:12 AM Hi Robert, You've penned a well written thought provoking write. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis Robert Stoner Jr December 23, 2016 at 2:16 PM Thanks for the read Alexis and words of encouragement for my effort, much appreciated, Merry Christmas

Darren White December 11, 2016 at 12:03 AM No, but it happens far too much, blind eyes. Congratulations! Robert Stoner Jr December 23, 2016 at 2:16 PM Thanks for the read and visit of congratulations , much appreciated. Merry Christmas.

Jan Allison December 10, 2016 at 6:46 PM Many congrats on your top spot Robert:-) I got a lump in my throat reading your poem ... a thought provoking write:-) hugs Jan xx Robert Stoner Jr December 23, 2016 at 2:15 PM Thank you Jan for the opportunity to explore this form and muse. A placement is appreciated as always, Merry Christmas to you and yours.

Paloma P December 8, 2016 at 9:40 AM I really like your take on the matter at hand, most affecting I've read so far, good luck Robert! Robert Stoner Jr December 23, 2016 at 2:14 PM Thanks Paloma for the read and comments on this effort, much appreciated, Merry Christmas

John Hamilton December 7, 2016 at 8:34 PM Great poem, love the concept, coming soon! Robert Stoner Jr December 23, 2016 at 2:13 PM Thanks John for your read and positive comment on this piece, Merry Christmas