Life in a Rocking Chair

      Life in a rocking chair
        in a room bereft of air
      Labored breath provides a scare

      Rock back and forth, ever harder
        what good to die a martyr
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Jones Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 7:42 PM
However do you come up with so many witty poems that sing like a dirty? Another mind teaser! Love it!
Legros Kelley Avatar
March 13, 2025 at 1:43 PM
I had a rocking chair till hubby stubbed his toe on it, and broke his poor toe!! Lol, I saw what you said below to one of the comments, Rock N' Roll to rocking chair, that is the size of it. Rock on Gershon, our friend! By the way, I sent a soupmail.
Wolf Avatar
March 13, 2025 at 8:24 PM
Rock on, Bj.
Gauthier Avatar
March 13, 2025 at 12:45 PM
I get this ~ live hard, rock harder.
Wolf Avatar
March 13, 2025 at 8:19 PM
You got it, Line. Don't fall out of the chair now!
Godwin Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 10:24 PM
How off the rocking wall is this! To me, this is deep and requires thought. I love what you wrote below about rock to rocking chair (for me, it is a recliner, must put up the feet.) You are usually my witty, upbeat writer and this speaks of 'other', so you're human? 'bereft of air / labored breathing' - we're not talking COPD, are we? IT IS A GOOD WRITE, I'm just concerned ... CayCay
Wolf Avatar
March 13, 2025 at 8:25 PM
Ha, ha. I don't even know what COPD is. Of course, I don't know what 'white privilege' is, and I've got that... Thanks for your always entertaining and provocative comments, CayCay!! :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 1:07 PM
I can feel the angst in this poem. Often we find the old in a rocker. Perhaps to be set in a rocker sounds like an end of life sentence.
Wolf Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 7:23 PM
From rock'n'roll to rock'n'chair --- more than most can bear!
Goldsmith Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 12:00 PM
I think this is a sad write and that is not like you. Are you OK??? You are the funny guy in town. The other day I was sad and then wrote a sad one. Smile~Laugh today as you write away...............
Wolf Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 7:24 PM
I'm o.k. Just rockin' away. ~ Wolfman Jack
Greenhough Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 9:17 PM
Interesting poem. Do rocking chairs assist the I'll? I found this confinement sad.
Wolf Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 7:24 PM
Sad, but true. From rock'n'roll to rockin' chair. Bleeaaah.
Tor Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 8:59 PM
Never seen a rocking chair. It would be fun to try one out. Read you later that is instead of see you later...
Tor Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 5:31 PM
lol
Wolf Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 7:27 PM
Ahem. Come on over and see mine. You can find it (and me) in the Art Institute. ~ Whistler's Mother
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