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Life In a Liquor Bottle

He dives into a liquor bottle, and Zigzags like a snake on the sand. A wife waits for her hero, But who comes as a zero. Obscenities ooze from his ‘stupor gland’. (My limerick which was selected and published in Selected Poems Anthology 2013 by Pendle War Poetry, U K)

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Butterfly Mantra

Date: 2/23/2015 7:21:00 AM

Nice! Hits like you're telling the truth about so many ppl, Congrats on your win Fabiyas

Fabiyas M V
Date: 2/23/2015 7:54:00 AM

Thanks a lot, Jessica. Your words are encouraging me

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/21/2015 1:17:00 PM

- Congratulation on your excellent limerick win, Fabiyas ! - I wish you a lovely weekend - // Anne-Lise :)

Fabiyas M V
Date: 2/21/2015 8:21:00 PM

Anne Lise, thanks a lot

Skat A

Date: 2/20/2015 11:11:00 PM

Fab, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for the support **SKAT LOVE**

Fabiyas M V
Date: 2/21/2015 8:32:00 AM

Thank you dear Skat. Wish you a good weekend!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/27/2014 6:23:00 PM

stupor gland. that is a good one. Congrats for your win.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/27/2014 10:21:00 AM

Excellent limerick! No wonder it is a winner! Congratulations on a well-deserved win! Pandita

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/26/2014 9:52:00 PM

Fabiyas :) Congratulations! Thank you for supporting my under 5 lines or less contest. Enjoy my blog "One Hard Word" when and if you have time. Always ~ LINDA ~