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Life Giving Rays

Waves covering stones.
Evaporation abounds.
Clouds give back their drink.

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Charles Henderson

April 1, 2010 at 8:30 PM

Very good Haiku, Marty. Thank you for your comment on my poem. Charles

Colleen Bono

March 30, 2010 at 3:16 PM

Just stopping by to wish you a Happy Easter.

Mitch White

March 30, 2010 at 1:26 PM

nice win Congrats Marty

John Freeman

March 30, 2010 at 8:03 AM

Congratulations in your success Marty. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

March 29, 2010 at 7:22 PM

Congrats - very imaginative piece

Doris Culverhouse

March 29, 2010 at 3:40 PM

congrats on the win!! Good write!

David Byrne

March 29, 2010 at 5:07 AM

very cyclical...................(excuse bad spelling!)

Brian Strand

March 29, 2010 at 12:03 AM

Congrats on your success with this one Marty.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.

Andrea Dietrich

March 28, 2010 at 10:40 PM

Was this one for the picture too,Marty? It is very nice. Thanks for your comment today. Luv, Andrea ps Karen says congratulations so I know you must have been in the winner's circle too. Congrats!

Gerard Keogh Jr.

March 28, 2010 at 4:47 PM

I like line three. That has some thought behind it. Thank you for your kind words, Marty Owens. I do apprteciate them . Regards, Gerard.

March 28, 2010 at 1:00 PM

Marty, I just wanted to stop by and add congratulations being one of the winners in Raul's contest to my other comment. Way to go! Enjoy your success. Karen

Audrey Haick

March 28, 2010 at 11:24 AM

Congratulations on your winning Haiku, Marty!!! Told you it was really good! Love, Audrey

Susan Keogh

March 28, 2010 at 9:22 AM

This is so beautiful and visual. Best of luck in Raul's contest! Thank you for your kind words. Susan

Caryl Muzzey

March 28, 2010 at 8:44 AM

A wonderful Haiku, congratulations on placing in the contest. Caryl

James Fraser

March 28, 2010 at 8:26 AM

Marty, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 28, 2010 at 6:52 AM

Another big congrats on your winning poem and placement in the Champagne Skies contest... a wonderful and vivid Haiku and a well earned trip to the winners circle..luv.. "Sweetheart" ...right behind u...luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 28, 2010 at 5:32 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Champagne Skies Contest Marty. Love Carol

Raul Moreno

March 28, 2010 at 12:58 AM

Marty, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul

Jimmy Anderson

March 27, 2010 at 2:40 PM

Hey Marty, Thanks for leaving comments on my poem...I've asked Audrey to post this comment for me....later, Jimmy

Audrey Haick

March 27, 2010 at 1:50 PM

An interesting take on that picture, Marty..really good...I thought so hard about mine.. I finally wrote what I could ..I wish you luck in the contest...Peace and love, Audrey