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Life Giving Rays

Waves covering stones.
Evaporation abounds.
Clouds give back their drink.

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Charles Henderson

Date: 4/1/2010 8:30:00 PM

Very good Haiku, Marty. Thank you for your comment on my poem. Charles

Colleen Bono

Date: 3/30/2010 3:16:00 PM

Just stopping by to wish you a Happy Easter.

Mitch White

Date: 3/30/2010 1:26:00 PM

nice win Congrats Marty

John Freeman

Date: 3/30/2010 8:03:00 AM

Congratulations in your success Marty. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/29/2010 7:22:00 PM

Congrats - very imaginative piece

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/29/2010 3:40:00 PM

congrats on the win!! Good write!

David Byrne

Date: 3/29/2010 5:07:00 AM

very cyclical...................(excuse bad spelling!)

Brian Strand

Date: 3/29/2010 12:03:00 AM

Congrats on your success with this one Marty.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2010 10:40:00 PM

Was this one for the picture too,Marty? It is very nice. Thanks for your comment today. Luv, Andrea ps Karen says congratulations so I know you must have been in the winner's circle too. Congrats!

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 3/28/2010 4:47:00 PM

I like line three. That has some thought behind it. Thank you for your kind words, Marty Owens. I do apprteciate them . Regards, Gerard.

Date: 3/28/2010 1:00:00 PM

Marty, I just wanted to stop by and add congratulations being one of the winners in Raul's contest to my other comment. Way to go! Enjoy your success. Karen

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/28/2010 11:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning Haiku, Marty!!! Told you it was really good! Love, Audrey

Susan Keogh

Date: 3/28/2010 9:22:00 AM

This is so beautiful and visual. Best of luck in Raul's contest! Thank you for your kind words. Susan

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 3/28/2010 8:44:00 AM

A wonderful Haiku, congratulations on placing in the contest. Caryl

James Fraser

Date: 3/28/2010 8:26:00 AM

Marty, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/28/2010 6:52:00 AM

Another big congrats on your winning poem and placement in the Champagne Skies contest... a wonderful and vivid Haiku and a well earned trip to the winners circle..luv.. "Sweetheart" ...right behind u...luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/28/2010 5:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Champagne Skies Contest Marty. Love Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/28/2010 12:58:00 AM

Marty, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 3/27/2010 2:40:00 PM

Hey Marty, Thanks for leaving comments on my poem...I've asked Audrey to post this comment for me....later, Jimmy

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/27/2010 1:50:00 PM

An interesting take on that picture, Marty..really good...I thought so hard about mine.. I finally wrote what I could ..I wish you luck in the contest...Peace and love, Audrey