John Freeman Poet Verse

Life Forms

~O the dread of a bobcat’s tusks    
  In search of rabbit in the brush
  Hunger in cat’s form is life’s thrust
  Swift, the bobcat’s pursue
  Still in life the rabbit must trust
  As life’s forms bid adieu 

A Rime Couee for and in Honor of Dr Ram
And contest

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Jack Horne July 13, 2011 at 2:30 PM Many congrats on all your recent wins, John : )

Tahera Mannan July 13, 2011 at 8:33 AM Very deep Moses. Many congrats dear friend for this win.

Carolyn Devonshire July 12, 2011 at 12:16 PM This is really quite deep and spiritual, John. Awesome use of the form and quite a compelling message as well. Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown July 12, 2011 at 5:23 AM Congratulations Moses on your win in the "Rime Couee" contest of Dr. Ram Mehta. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson July 11, 2011 at 2:43 PM Congratulations John. Great job. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 11, 2011 at 2:16 PM Congrats Moses my friend on your excellent win with new form and expressive words of entry luv.. awesome as always ..u inspire..

Dr.Ram Mehta July 11, 2011 at 2:00 PM My congratulations on this win in my contest, John

Joe Maverick July 7, 2011 at 1:54 PM Wishing you all the best in Dr Rams contest John, i am sure this will place well i have made a comment on your blog (again) i made one a while ago yet did not see it come up so i did another and guess what.? yes there was the 1st one..!

Carolyn Devonshire July 7, 2011 at 1:38 PM Wow, this can be taken on several levels, John. At first, I was thinking about human foibles, but there is also the element of species extinction. Very provocative. Winning wishesto you for Dr. Ram's contest. Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud July 5, 2011 at 5:53 AM how you ended this hunting game is incredible, moe... life is precious! beautiful with winning wishes! :) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 4, 2011 at 3:36 PM wonderful words Moses my friend.. a clear picture of the hunt and hunted prey... good luck in the contest luv and happy 4th celebration...

Andrea Dietrich July 4, 2011 at 11:29 AM Hey, you did great with this new form, john. An interesting topic you pursued!!