Life-- Eta--Springtime

The warmth of the sun
Pitter-Patter of Spring rain
Life blooms Abundant
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 13, 2012 at 8:09 PM
What a sweet haiku. I love the rain, though I don't get much of it here in the warmth of southern California. This poem allowed me to visualize with much tremendous imagry the beautific atmosphere of springtime--in sound, smell and sight..such insight! Great one. Always, Laura
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November 23, 2010 at 6:24 PM
You are really good at these, HG. I adore haiku and senryu, so I will read all the ones I can find on your page 5!
Moreno Avatar
March 3, 2009 at 9:05 PM
Good to see you back HG, I missed you on the Soup. Hope you enter this is Carol Brown's Springtime Contest...Raul
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March 3, 2009 at 4:40 PM
I can't wait for spring and those blooms! It's cold and windy here in North Dakota. Creative title! Enjoyed this one. Karen
Gorelick Avatar
March 3, 2009 at 12:32 PM
I makes me warm to see you back with us. This is lovely. Barbeeg..BG
Gorelick Avatar
March 3, 2009 at 12:32 PM
I makes me warm to see you back with us. This is lovely. Barbeeg..BG
Winter Avatar
March 3, 2009 at 12:16 PM
Beeeeutiful! So wonderful to read your excellent poetry. Gorgeous imagery. Hope you are feeling great! Will email you soon. Big hugs, Shar xoxoxoxo
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March 3, 2009 at 10:03 AM
You capture the welcome sight, sound and feel of spring. Very nice haiku! Best wishes, Carolyn
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