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Life Drawing 1

Beautiful woman
Posing
Can't do her justice
Just want her gesture
Her grace
In a line
In a colour
Her essence
Elusive

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/5/2011 6:11:00 PM
I like this. It's simple,but piercing. keep it up.
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Date: 1/14/2011 2:24:00 PM
Paintings usually reveal only what's on the surface, Liz, but there are some that can show a person's inner "essence." I'm thinking of Mona Lisa. A very thought-provoking poem. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/14/2011 9:30:00 AM
YOu are so good, LIz!!
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Date: 1/14/2011 7:57:00 AM
Worthy of Whistler's Mother. On to the next drawing - Dave
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Date: 1/14/2011 4:35:00 AM
Sorry Liz That should be painting
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Date: 1/14/2011 4:34:00 AM
Hi Liz. Ever the supreme artist, in paintimg and writing. Eamon
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