Life Drawing 1

Beautiful woman
Posing
Can't do her justice
Just want her gesture
Her grace
In a line
In a colour
Her essence
Elusive
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Bakare Avatar
November 5, 2011 at 6:11 PM
I like this. It's simple,but piercing. keep it up.
Devonshire Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 2:24 PM
Paintings usually reveal only what's on the surface, Liz, but there are some that can show a person's inner "essence." I'm thinking of Mona Lisa. A very thought-provoking poem. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 9:30 AM
YOu are so good, LIz!!
Austin Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 7:57 AM
Worthy of Whistler's Mother. On to the next drawing - Dave
Duffin Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 4:35 AM
Sorry Liz That should be painting
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January 14, 2011 at 4:34 AM
Hi Liz. Ever the supreme artist, in paintimg and writing. Eamon
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