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Life Deceives

do not forsake me all i did was make you feel love is forever. © Harry J Horsman 2013

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Kim Van Breda

Date: 6/7/2013 8:39:00 AM

This is a clever summary of so many things. Enjoyed the read.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/3/2013 8:30:00 AM

Read it again....loved it again! Just stopping by to say...HEY HARRY! :)

Robert Johnson

Date: 6/2/2013 3:24:00 PM

Do they even deserve it? :/

Len Gasun

Date: 6/2/2013 4:09:00 AM

A great message of love on this great write of yours my dear friend Harry. I like it. Thank you so much for sharing! Have a wonderful weekend! love/ hugs, Leonora

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/30/2013 10:45:00 AM

Aww shucks...short but so loaded with emotion-- this is sad yet you bring that love alive. Beautiful meaningful write, Harry.

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/29/2013 12:25:00 PM

Simple and meaningful. Well done. AO

Cory Long

Date: 5/28/2013 7:24:00 AM

A wonderful message in so few words. take care, cory

Sandy Ivy D

Date: 5/26/2013 9:56:00 PM

thank you :-)

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 5/26/2013 7:21:00 PM

So beautiful.....our wish for forever. SuZ

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 5/26/2013 11:45:00 AM

Very potent words Harry and so true! Hugs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/25/2013 4:28:00 PM

sentimental as love itself... stunning, you do paint your words as if you used a brush...:) huggs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/25/2013 9:03:00 AM

So romantic it hurts.

Christine Phillips

Date: 5/25/2013 8:33:00 AM

How romatic and yet sorrowful? nice poem

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2013 12:38:00 AM

Oh gosh, Harry is BACK and with another romantic senryu. thanks for letting me know you were back today, Harry.

Karen Anglesey

Date: 5/24/2013 8:42:00 PM

The power of love sometimes feels like it hangs on a thread...you are absolutely right on the money with this beautifully expressed Senryu...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/24/2013 1:45:00 PM

Ahhh!!So romantic..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments were encouraging..Sara

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/24/2013 1:36:00 PM

Soulful haiku, depth of love reality in true sense. Loved always, bl

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 5/24/2013 10:51:00 AM

As Ilene says could there be anything better, I think not, love it harry xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/24/2013 10:30:00 AM

- Yes ..... forever!! - Well done, Harry! - Have a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/24/2013 9:52:00 AM

WOW! That's ALL you did? Could there be a better thing to do, Harry? Superb! 7 all the way! :)