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Life Deceives

do not forsake me
all i did was make you feel
love is forever.

© Harry J Horsman 2013

Copyright © Harry Horsman | Year Posted 2013

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June 7, 2013 at 8:39 AM

This is a clever summary of so many things. Enjoyed the read.

Eileen Manassian

June 3, 2013 at 8:30 AM

Read it again....loved it again! Just stopping by to say...HEY HARRY! :)

June 2, 2013 at 3:24 PM

Do they even deserve it? :/

June 2, 2013 at 4:09 AM

A great message of love on this great write of yours my dear friend Harry. I like it. Thank you so much for sharing! Have a wonderful weekend! love/ hugs, Leonora

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

May 30, 2013 at 10:45 AM

Aww shucks...short but so loaded with emotion-- this is sad yet you bring that love alive. Beautiful meaningful write, Harry.

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

May 29, 2013 at 12:25 PM

Simple and meaningful. Well done. AO

May 28, 2013 at 7:24 AM

A wonderful message in so few words. take care, cory

May 26, 2013 at 9:56 PM

thank you :-)

Suzanne Delaney

May 26, 2013 at 7:21 PM

So beautiful.....our wish for forever. SuZ

Cecilia Macfarlane

May 26, 2013 at 11:45 AM

Very potent words Harry and so true! Hugs

May 25, 2013 at 4:28 PM

sentimental as love itself... stunning, you do paint your words as if you used a brush...:) huggs

Richard Lamoureux

May 25, 2013 at 9:03 AM

So romantic it hurts.

Christine Phillips

May 25, 2013 at 8:33 AM

How romatic and yet sorrowful? nice poem

Andrea Dietrich

May 25, 2013 at 12:38 AM

Oh gosh, Harry is BACK and with another romantic senryu. thanks for letting me know you were back today, Harry.

May 24, 2013 at 8:42 PM

The power of love sometimes feels like it hangs on a thread...you are absolutely right on the money with this beautifully expressed Senryu...

May 24, 2013 at 1:45 PM

Ahhh!!So romantic..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments were encouraging..Sara

May 24, 2013 at 1:36 PM

Soulful haiku, depth of love reality in true sense. Loved always, bl

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

May 24, 2013 at 10:51 AM

As Ilene says could there be anything better, I think not, love it harry xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 24, 2013 at 10:30 AM

- Yes ..... forever!! - Well done, Harry! - Have a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

May 24, 2013 at 9:52 AM

WOW! That's ALL you did? Could there be a better thing to do, Harry? Superb! 7 all the way! :)

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