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Life, Cried To Sighed

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The sands of time flow toward the mortal sea, Quickly, as a river - fast and free, Everything that we abide, Carried on its tide. Life's first breath - Cried ... Its last, death, A final hope, sighed. Thus, we value life in stride, Standing on the shore where we can see The sands of time flow toward the mortal sea. Written and submitted on November 10, 2018 For the "Andaree Poem" Poetry Contest Emile Pinet, Judge & Sponsor. * Syllables counted at HowManySyllables.com. *

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Eve Roper

Date: 11/24/2018 2:54:00 PM

congratulation in your win

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2018 7:39:00 PM

Thank you very much, Eve, (sorry I'm just seeing this now) ... blessings! :-) <3

P.S. Awtry

Date: 11/24/2018 1:19:00 PM

Congratulations. A very beautiful poem.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2018 7:38:00 PM

Thank you very much, PS, I appreciate that, (sorry I'm just seeing it now) ... blessings, my friend! :-)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/24/2018 1:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win Greg! Andrea's form was a real challenge for me. You seem to have mastered it easily! : ) xxoo

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2018 7:38:00 PM

Oh, that's very kind of you to say, Connie, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it, (sorry I'm just seeing it now) ... blessings, Dear Poet! :-) <3

Emile Pinet

Date: 11/24/2018 12:27:00 PM

Congratulations Gregory, your poem earned a distinguished place in my PoetrySoup contest. Very well done my friend, it wasn’t easy to judge, Emile.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2018 7:37:00 PM

Thank you so much, Emile, I'm honored that you found my poem so worthy of placement, (sorry I'm just seeing it now) ... blessings, my friend! :-)

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/24/2018 12:27:00 PM

A beauty, Gregory. Congrats on your win.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2018 7:36:00 PM

Many thanks to you, Line! :-) <3

Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 11/13/2018 4:43:00 AM

A skilled, creative and impressively constructed piece of art that integrates all of its aspected into one highly pleasing whole. Very well done, Gregory.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2018 7:36:00 PM

This is such a kind comment, Geoffrey, and I'm very pleased that you liked this one, (sorry I'm just seeing it now) ... blessings, my friend! :-)