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Drenched to the skin in sweat after mowing the lawn I am lounging on my sun-dappled back porch with a glass of cold water and notice a squirrel scampering across the railing of the back deck of my neighbor’s house which has a view of a bluff of trees. Seeing me, it scurries up to my railing and stands sizing me up like a praying mantis; I close my eyes with a smile and breathe in content. a cool breeze passes the scent of freshly cut grass a crow caws afar ~06/08/18 ~Haibun contest by Mick Talbot

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Date: 7/17/2018 1:36:00 PM
Decidedly a lovely place after some hard work. Creative winning work. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 7/7/2018 9:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Great imagery and wonderful haiku. :)
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Date: 7/5/2018 8:37:00 PM
All good but albeit a single last sentence it should of had a haiku follow it, however a well worthy second place, congratulations Abdul, and many thanks for participating, Mick
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Date: 7/7/2018 11:52:00 AM
Fixed it. Appreciate the 2nd place. Thanks Mick.
Date: 6/10/2018 5:54:00 PM
A lovely summer image Abdul. Tom
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