Life Comes In Small Packages

Drenched to the skin in sweat after mowing the lawn 
I am lounging on my sun-dappled back porch  
with a glass of cold water and notice a squirrel 
scampering across the railing of 
the back deck of my neighbor’s house 
which has a view of a bluff of trees. 
Seeing me, it scurries up to my railing and
stands sizing me up like a praying mantis;

I close my eyes with a smile and breathe in content.

a cool breeze passes
the scent of freshly cut grass
a crow caws afar



~06/08/18
~Haibun contest by Mick Talbot
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kendrick Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 1:36 PM
Decidedly a lovely place after some hard work. Creative winning work. Congrats. Sara
Gentry Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 9:31 AM
Congratulations on your win. Great imagery and wonderful haiku. :)
Talbot Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 8:37 PM
All good but albeit a single last sentence it should of had a haiku follow it, however a well worthy second place, congratulations Abdul, and many thanks for participating, Mick
Mandani Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 11:52 AM
Fixed it. Appreciate the 2nd place. Thanks Mick.
Cunningham Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 5:54 PM
A lovely summer image Abdul. Tom
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