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A lesson to us all to think about our Life Choices.

Life Choices

LIFE CHOICES
By
Kevin L Fairbrother

He sat in his rocking chair, willing time to pass
A stubby of beer in his hand and a *** in his mouth
Rocking to the country music blaring in the background
This man so alone, thinking about his last breath

Once a family man of great strength and character
Working days spent at the saw mill in the bush
Sucking on rollies through-out the working day
Never thinking that one day he would be short of breath

The ravages of life choices, booze and fags will shorten your time
For now his ravaged body is but a shadow of it self
Lacking in energy, can’t work, crippled with pain hard to walk
His body once full of life, now dying from life choices

Slowly the man lifts the beer to savior the nectar he needs
Time is suddenly frozen for he never gets his last drink
His body slumped he has succumbed, no pain now, just silence
The rocking chair now still, his body lifeless and growing cold

Life choices have taken this man too early, he was so young
He had the choice to not drink alcohol or smoke tobacco
He had the choice of living a long and productive life
But LIFE CHOICES ended his time on earth to soon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A   Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 12:15 PM
kevin, enjoyed reading your poem, Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. XOX -- LINDA --
Fairbrother Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 9:18 PM
Thanks Linda and I enjoy reading your great verses, cheers Kev
A  Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 11:46 PM
A heartfelt end. No one ever knows what time, one shall go. Kevin, thanks for sharing the message. SKAT
Fairbrother Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 11:32 PM
Thanks SKAT, makes one think how precious our choices are. Cheers Kev
Woods    Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 1:30 AM
Like a smack between the eyes with a sledge hammer, your poem hits home. A very good write sir
Woods    Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 2:20 AM
As a mild partaker of both these evils (nicotine and beer), this was a touch to close to home for comfort.
Fairbrother Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 2:11 AM
Well thanks Mark, I suppose I could have included a verse re the current epidemic of ice that effects so many of our young. Cheers Kev
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