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Life Breathes Wonder

Squatting lakeside darting swimmers at their feet. Shouldered burdens over shadow even family time. Prayers for Peace carried in whispers breath after breath. Gods coloring book pages of hope, peace, beauty. Just inhale the wonder!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/16/2008 10:30:00 AM
I like this Patricia. The economy of it works really well. In the fourth stanza I was puzzled about 'gods'; should there be an apostrophe there? But I think not. It reads well and makes great sense without one. It is also a very clever device.
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Date: 12/16/2008 9:38:00 AM
Beautifully written... *Breana
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Date: 12/15/2008 12:20:00 PM
Inspirational and lovely writing, Patricia! ~ Carrie
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