Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

- Life Behind the Mirror -

Enchanting chambers made of glass 
Breaking reflections shatter falling into ruin
The history behind the tears and sorrow of a heart
Fragile echoes inside truth broken always sings 
If this be loves beauty like dropping crystals splash
Speaks a language of one thousand tongues when the sparks fly
 
The soul released from thought 
Faraway shadows cover a dream
When you have found what you're looking for
And always breathe in the beauty of nature
Silver buds glisten in morning dew 

Millions of years before you or me
Weeping willow hangs heavy over us 
These things and so many more
have made you and me understand
Blossoming sunshine shades golden 
Crowned kissed by love in the summer  rain 

What a beauty to wake up to birdsong
Carried on gentle winds when they sigh
Hearing screams from the raven far up in the mountains
Secrets of the water flowing whispers 
Our lives have a meaning here on this earth
Stars circle your space in another realm 
Thoughts and dreams put together as mosaic
A moon smiles as shadows dances to a joyous tune 
The smell of pine needles tickle in the nose
As a sun lights our footsteps with golden harmony 
Commitment strong and sense of purpose is the key to life
 



13.05.2015
Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :)
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Dorian Petersen Potter May 17, 2015 at 11:07 PM Hi Liam n' Anne Lise!Another very beautiful awesome and powerful collaboration penned by you my dearest friends.Very beautifully written.Just dazzling!I enjoyed it!A 7+++ to each!A very enchanting wonderful poem with a nice message.smiling.Your pens are truly mighty golden!Sweet imagery.Amazing piece!A delight to read.Wish you a lovely week!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n'hugs!xoxoxD.^O^

Paul Callus May 17, 2015 at 4:00 PM Top marks for this delightful collaboration, Liam & Anne Lise. The imagery and choice of words give this poem that something special that brings it up to a higher level. All the best. // paul

Jan Allison May 17, 2015 at 1:51 PM Anne Lise and Liam your writing goes from strength to strength a beautiful emotional write - the imagery is lovely i particularly like the smiling moon at the dancing shadows - the final line is so so true:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Anne-Lise Andresen May 17, 2015 at 1:45 PM * - Norway in red, white and blue .... May 17 - Norway's National Day today !!!!! - HOORAY! - A pleasure to give you a 7 and a fav. - Thank you, my dear friend! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)