Life Becomes a Wonderland

I see you smile, I listen you smile
With no any tension, with no any fear
A hope gives me wings to fly above high
 With your lovely smile
I feel the essence of your soul happiness
I get redemption the very time
A glance of your spirit, a visualization of your presence 
Realizes me of myself
And with an eagerness to know more about myself; 
I get into you deep inside, 
Where a bliss hits my energy, I become blissful
And that is when
Life becomes a wonderland for me.

Weakness is my emotional nature
You become my supporting framework,
A determination rises and becomes a declaration
When I listen you saying
I am with you; don’t worry.
Energy gets filled with positivity
Ultimately
Which becomes a postulates for surviving
I become self-potent, self-aware.
Thought becomes deeper
A step goes towards reality of
Knowing the reality.
The time I am guided by your love 
And that is when 
Life becomes a wonderland for me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Andresen Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 11:44 AM
- Hello Mukesh :) - Welcome to P - Soup :) - A wonderful first poem from you, a delight to read :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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November 7, 2015 at 9:11 AM
thank you Anne... :)
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November 4, 2015 at 12:47 PM
Mukesh, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Ojha Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 12:06 AM
thank you so much Linda for such beautiful words...
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November 4, 2015 at 10:57 AM
Mukesh, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Ojha Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 12:07 AM
thank you for the warm welcome Skata... ;) hoping for same support in the future...
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