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Life as You Create

In an egg like world
One thought he is what he is
Long before his birth

Doing more shrewd steps
Grounding too much to struggle
Thriving as crystals

Water like mirror
Reminds human true nature
Splendid moments leap.






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Date: 4/6/2016 4:06:00 PM
Just reading your note that you replied to me a long time ago in September of last year (I don't see the replies because my notification feature is turned off) So you are a november baby, huh? You are end of fall. I am beginning!
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Date: 3/21/2016 10:08:00 PM
Love this one, I was born in October. Marvin. PD
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marvin celestial
Date: 3/28/2016 4:08:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 9/16/2015 10:46:00 PM
I see this is a winner. Big congrats. ARe you an October baby?
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Date: 9/16/2015 11:46:00 PM
Thanks Andrea! November...A month before dawn, on October sky is November.
Date: 9/9/2015 5:11:00 PM
Marvin, you paint an amazing visual and earn a well deserved win in the process, many congrats!
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Date: 9/2/2015 12:27:00 PM
This is a different take on this theme, when compared to the others, Marvin. A poet born in October! Congrats on your podium finish! // paul
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marvin celestial
Date: 9/8/2015 6:30:00 AM
Hi Paul! Thank you! Actually November, October is a month before November, before dawn. I was born 12:30am of Nov 15, 1968. Thanks for dropping by...
Date: 9/2/2015 12:02:00 AM
Marvin, thank you for the October Sky (three headed haiku) WIN.... SKAT
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marvin celestial
Date: 9/2/2015 12:24:00 AM
Thank you Skat! I didnt expect I won!
Date: 8/31/2015 4:51:00 AM
Eloquent words n lovely haiku string marvin! congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/31/2015 5:11:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Upma!
Date: 8/20/2015 10:42:00 AM
Your words speak in an elusive abstract voice that supplies the catalyst to spark further thought. Emile
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Date: 8/20/2015 10:45:00 AM
Great Emile! Thanks!
Date: 8/20/2015 9:14:00 AM
wow Marvin I do love your take on the contest theme:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/20/2015 9:30:00 AM
Yes Jan! Thanks!