Marvin G. Celestial Poet Haiku

Life As You Create

In an egg like world
One thought he is what he is
Long before his birth

Doing more shrewd steps
Grounding too much to struggle
Thriving as crystals

Water like mirror
Reminds human true nature
Splendid moments leap.

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Andrea Dietrich April 6, 2016 at 4:06 PM Just reading your note that you replied to me a long time ago in September of last year (I don't see the replies because my notification feature is turned off) So you are a november baby, huh? You are end of fall. I am beginning!

Poet Destroyer A March 21, 2016 at 10:08 PM Love this one, I was born in October. Marvin. PD Marvin G. Celestial March 28, 2016 at 4:08 AM Thanks!

Andrea Dietrich September 16, 2015 at 10:46 PM I see this is a winner. Big congrats. ARe you an October baby? Marvin G. Celestial September 16, 2015 at 11:46 PM Thanks Andrea! November...A month before dawn, on October sky is November.

Paul Callus September 2, 2015 at 12:27 PM This is a different take on this theme, when compared to the others, Marvin. A poet born in October! Congrats on your podium finish! // paul Marvin G. Celestial September 8, 2015 at 6:30 AM Hi Paul! Thank you! Actually November, October is a month before November, before dawn. I was born 12:30am of Nov 15, 1968. Thanks for dropping by...

Skat A September 2, 2015 at 12:02 AM Marvin, thank you for the October Sky (three headed haiku) WIN.... SKAT Marvin G. Celestial September 2, 2015 at 12:24 AM Thank you Skat! I didnt expect I won!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 31, 2015 at 4:51 AM Eloquent words n lovely haiku string marvin! congrats on big win! Marvin G. Celestial August 31, 2015 at 5:11 AM Thanks Dr. Upma!

Emile Pinet August 20, 2015 at 10:42 AM Your words speak in an elusive abstract voice that supplies the catalyst to spark further thought. Emile Marvin G. Celestial August 20, 2015 at 10:45 AM Great Emile! Thanks!

Jan Allison August 20, 2015 at 9:14 AM wow Marvin I do love your take on the contest theme:-) Hugs Jan xx Marvin G. Celestial August 20, 2015 at 9:30 AM Yes Jan! Thanks!