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Life As the Phoenix

Shattered like falling tears colliding on karma’s lips sniffling ideas linger between the pieces of a broken spirit. A spirit which once stood indestructible on the doorsteps of hell and fearless in the living rooms of the dead. Now I lay shattered, Powerless, Gasping for air amid rapids which course crevices of my face; Striving not to be drowned by the wells of my own origins I search, Severely seeking shattered sources of a severed smile. Gathering aspects of I, Yet leaving fallacies of reality amongst broken pieces. I will rise a phoenix until

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Date: 11/2/2009 5:12:00 PM
nicely p[enned, good one!!
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Date: 10/24/2009 11:14:00 AM
Awesome writing here, James. So glad to see you posting again here at the Soup !!
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Date: 10/22/2009 12:07:00 AM
Great work James.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
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Date: 10/21/2009 5:40:00 PM
I enjoyed this fine poetry! James!
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Date: 10/21/2009 4:49:00 PM
This is an awesome write James..I think the lines work very well..write on.
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Date: 10/21/2009 4:03:00 PM
I really really like it..yet the last line does not do the verse justice (poke) Light & Love..also sorry if you are having a bad spell!
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