Life Aquatic

Take a breath, dip and glide. 
Letting silken water slide past me. 
Counting breathing, counting breathing. 
Nothing from my normal world can distract. 
Only my own neuroses, lack of confidence. 
Feeling I am holding people up. 
In the way, undeserved. 
Yet as I glide I concentrate only on
Counting breathing, counting breathing. 

The beauty holds me, forgives. 
Takes my tensions, and like ripples in a pond, 
Allows them to distance themselves, 
Weaken as they drift far and wide. 
The waves subsiding as my mind clears. 
Stillness and calm, despite the movement 
as I forge ahead, stroke stroke stroke breath. 
Water moving yet somehow solid. 
Supporting, encapsulating my body, 
Weightless as I am suspended, 
Fluid motion, equal forces, 
All working in perfect harmony. 
The perfect, pure pleasure of 
Being at one in the river of life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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