Life and Death

LIFE AND DEATH

The idea of death
The reality of death
Though close
In youth the two seem poles apart
Yet, as one gets older
As spirit slowly leaves the body
That husk – with lingering now mentality –
Reluctantly finds self uncomfortably squeezed 
Between the two
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Effendi Avatar
March 26, 2012 at 2:56 AM
I once read somewhere, the important thing to remember about "Growing Old" is "Growing". Remakable write, sir.
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March 8, 2012 at 7:23 PM
...lingering now mentality... love this line Daver. beautiful poem
Wesley Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 6:02 PM
I guess we need to die to find out what it's all about but don't relish the idea. This gets me thinking and feeling like I don't want to go there. A great poem gives something to ponder which this one does.
Horne Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 12:12 PM
Yes, this is such a true observation, Daver
Sweetheart Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 2:34 PM
a mesmerizing write on life and death.. daver.. and a proverbial message within these lines.. I wrote a peom early on called "Opposite Forces".. along the same premise luv.. something profeound to ponder.. as years roll on..lluv..
Devonshire Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 2:15 PM
Wow, Daver, I can really relate to the message here. Young people feel they are invincible. At this time I like my spirit is slowly leaving my body. As you say so eloquently here, it is the state between life and death that make people feel "uncomfortably squeezed." That's not the case for me though, my friend. I am at peace with whatever our Creater has planned for us. Love, Carolyn
Austin Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 2:25 PM
You are a very special lady. Love ya. daver
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