Life and Death

The Pale Rider

Astride an ashen horse,
a raven perched on his shoulder,
and a melancholy moon
beaming down gray shadows,
He held a gleaming scythe 
in one hand, and in his other, 
a damning edict from Hades,
the Lord of the underworld.
He was spurring on across 
some god-forsaken terrain
leaving the winds wailing in his wake.

He was racing against time
to ensnare one more good soul
before the rise of the sun,
to knock on one more door
before a sliver of sunbeam 
shine upon the morning dew.

He had his eyes ablaze
set upon the doomed soul
and his errand foreordained.  

But the entire universe works
toward salvaging a righteous soul
who repents his past wrongdoings

The sun rose over the eastern horizon
and warded off the onslaught of 
the condemnation to Hadean eternity…
as death dissipates with the mist of dawn.



~Contest: A Brian Strand July 22
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kauffman Avatar
July 23, 2021 at 9:30 AM
Very powerful Abdul. Congratulations on your win. I really like the undertones of light and the triumph of good over evil.
Mandani Avatar
July 23, 2021 at 9:48 AM
Appreciate your comment very much. Thanks.
Johnson Avatar
July 23, 2021 at 6:18 AM
Congrats my friend for your top placement. A great write and a great read.
Mandani Avatar
July 23, 2021 at 9:47 AM
Thanks Curtis. Glad you liked it.
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