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Listen to poem:
in the chill of morning air
a presence surreal yet tangible

its silence a fulfilled longing
as the sun begins to rise

life in all its glory revealed
within a grander plan

still the cynic caterpillar
refuses to believe



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology book ~WHAT IF THIS IS ALL THERE IS~ 2023

AP: 3rd place 2021

Posted on August 27, 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 9/16/2021 2:16:00 PM
I loved this last line about" the cynical caterpillar." We certainly can't give up that hope of evolving. Very clever and congratulations on this couplet Line.
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Date: 9/16/2021 3:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, Nancy. Most appreciated ~
Date: 8/29/2021 3:56:00 AM
Thought filled couplet Line
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Date: 8/29/2021 5:59:00 AM
Thank you so much for your most appreciated visit and comment, Brian ~
Date: 8/28/2021 7:41:00 AM
Line, I love the twist at the end of this write it took me by surprise..Delice
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Date: 8/28/2021 2:00:00 PM
Thanks, Delice. Much appreciated ~

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