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Life According To John Lawless

Life according to John Lawless


Real Life

a childish attempt to gather leaves
on a windy day

looking out the window at the rain
wearing swim suit and goggles

standing in the mud – wondering
why you just couldn’t resist it

a yard sale of emotions
tarnished and tagged


Ah Life

Curator of the hearts mausoleum
Guardian of guilt’s abyss
Overseer of the asylums mind
Debunker of both truths and lies


Still Life

a childish attempt at growing old
looking out the window at the rain
gazing at the mud – wondering
why life couldn’t just leave you alone


10/29/2015

submitted to – Life according to…. – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Silent One

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/4/2015 6:35:00 AM
Ah ! Guardian of guilt's abyss! Amazing!
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Date: 11/4/2015 5:36:00 AM
A well written verse my friend. Congrats for your WIN! ;-)
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John Lawless
Date: 11/10/2015 9:08:00 AM
Thanks teddy for stopping by to comment..
Date: 11/3/2015 5:27:00 PM
Very clever, John. Loved your "life according to John Lawless!" Congrats on your fine win. Sandra
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John Lawless
Date: 11/10/2015 9:07:00 AM
Thanks Sandra.
Date: 11/3/2015 1:12:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/3/2015 12:48:00 PM
John, Congrats on your win. SKAT
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John Lawless
Date: 11/10/2015 9:07:00 AM
Thank You SKAT
Date: 11/3/2015 8:45:00 AM
wow...this poem brings a sweet feeling.. :) stay blessed friend.. :D Congrats..~7~
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John Lawless
Date: 11/10/2015 9:06:00 AM
thanks for stopping by to comment and for the high mark
Date: 10/30/2015 5:52:00 PM
John I would like to read the poem you mentioned in your blog comment.Can I find it here on PS? If so what date did you post it.regards Brian
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John Lawless
Date: 10/30/2015 6:03:00 PM
Brian, the title of the poem is "Why Poetry Must Be Read Aloud", it was posted on 8/13/2014. Sorry I gave the wrong title on the blog.
Date: 10/29/2015 4:31:00 PM
excellent pen john good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 11/3/2015 7:06:00 AM
Thanks Jan always good to hear from you
Date: 10/29/2015 12:46:00 PM
You are on top form with this write. I love it!
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John Lawless
Date: 11/3/2015 7:05:00 AM
Thanks Julia
Date: 10/29/2015 12:36:00 PM
John....how thrilling.....You 'done' it up good!.....
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John Lawless
Date: 11/3/2015 7:04:00 AM
Thanks Judy I'm still fortunate to have some "leaves still blowing in the wind".

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