Life According To John Lawless

Life according to John Lawless


Real Life

a childish attempt to gather leaves
on a windy day

looking out the window at the rain
wearing swim suit and goggles

standing in the mud – wondering
why you just couldn’t resist it

a yard sale of emotions
tarnished and tagged


Ah Life

Curator of the hearts mausoleum
Guardian of guilt’s abyss
Overseer of the asylums mind
Debunker of both truths and lies


Still Life

a childish attempt at growing old
looking out the window at the rain
gazing at the mud – wondering
why life couldn’t just leave you alone


10/29/2015

submitted to – Life according to…. – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Cheema Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 6:35 AM
Ah ! Guardian of guilt's abyss! Amazing!
Kimathi Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 5:36 AM
A well written verse my friend. Congrats for your WIN! ;-)
Lawless Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 9:08 AM
Thanks teddy for stopping by to comment..
Haight Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 5:27 PM
Very clever, John. Loved your "life according to John Lawless!" Congrats on your fine win. Sandra
Lawless Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 9:07 AM
Thanks Sandra.
Allison Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 1:12 PM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
A  Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 12:48 PM
John, Congrats on your win. SKAT
Lawless Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 9:07 AM
Thank You SKAT
Viswan Bhatia Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 8:45 AM
wow...this poem brings a sweet feeling.. :) stay blessed friend.. :D Congrats..~7~
Lawless Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 9:06 AM
thanks for stopping by to comment and for the high mark
Strand Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 5:52 PM
John I would like to read the poem you mentioned in your blog comment.Can I find it here on PS? If so what date did you post it.regards Brian
Lawless Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 6:03 PM
Brian, the title of the poem is "Why Poetry Must Be Read Aloud", it was posted on 8/13/2014. Sorry I gave the wrong title on the blog.
Allison Avatar
October 29, 2015 at 4:31 PM
excellent pen john good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Lawless Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 7:06 AM
Thanks Jan always good to hear from you
Ward Avatar
October 29, 2015 at 12:46 PM
You are on top form with this write. I love it!
Lawless Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 7:05 AM
Thanks Julia
Konos Avatar
October 29, 2015 at 12:36 PM
John....how thrilling.....You 'done' it up good!.....
Lawless Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 7:04 AM
Thanks Judy I'm still fortunate to have some "leaves still blowing in the wind".
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