Life

Life can be rough 
It can be tough sometimes 
IAm not saying what iam thinking 
But know what iam saying 

Life itself can be hurting 
Made worse by people 

Listen to this testimony 
Who can believe this 
He was I don't ever wish 
To be like him 
Kind of person 
Speaking of losers
An e.g
An input in motivation 
"Don't be like him"

His name used to make
Jokes even funnier 
His life was an emotional stressor

Made him an angry cloud 
An unreliable sunlight 
His smile 

He just poured anytime 
But people New a happy guy
An I don't have a problem person 
Even when it's there 
What a musk 

Every of his smile was venomous 
To the insight 
It was never real 

But look at him now
At the realm of hard work 
Happy for real 

For him
Comforting world of his 
Who can believe 
This testimony 
Is me 
Back I high school 
Early in high school 

Well these, this and moment 
And to come 
They are mine
I now love this world  of mine 

It was a mess through devotion 
I turned it around 
 
This moment is mine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 2/27/2025 5:14:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed day.
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Date: 1/6/2018 4:32:00 PM
Excelente..."I now love this world of mine It was a mess through devotion I turned it around This moment is mine" I like this... Blessing to you, Anathi
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