Life

Life will bring pleasure
Searching good in every bad
Soul stays in heaven.


Life will bring peace
Be positive in each hell
Smile mirrors your soul.

Life will bring unity
augmenting relation in every odd
personality connects heart.

Life will bring strength
consuming tear in every fear
Hero, we all prefer.

Life will bring success
killing failure with best drudgery
Goal smiles nice.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Ricci Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 3:15 PM
Hello Manmath. Wow this is marvelous. I so enjoyed your second version regarding peace and soul. That truly spoke to me. You obviously can write in this format because each was executed wonderfully. Well done throughout.
Anish Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 11:57 PM
Nice take on life as a whole in this work. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Dietrich Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 6:35 PM
Very nice thoughts, Manmath. Coming here also to wish you Happy New Year!
Andresen Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 4:38 AM
- A beautiful haiku, Manmath - Best wishes for a peaceful Christmas for you and your family - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 1:37 PM
Your soul smiles with every poem you write Manmath as you share your gifts with us. Blessings, Connie : )
Dalei Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 11:19 AM
Thanks a lot for ur friendly visit.
Breidenthal Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 6:24 PM
Wonderful poem that is full of intelligence and knowledge. A moving piece too! -JWE
Vaso Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 9:17 PM
Beautiful and wise!
Leachet Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 5:44 AM
Life can be such a wonderful thing if you let it be. Nicely done.
Murray Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 9:39 AM
It's obvious you love life Manmath.
Dietrich Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 3:57 PM
very nice, Manmath. How are you doing these days?
Dalei Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 8:27 AM
I am fine Andrea. Thanks for ur nice comment.
Perlin Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 9:16 AM
Very nice! Profound....
Kyle Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 6:46 AM
Great one
Gupta Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 6:43 AM
A nice poem of optimism ...
Trifiatis Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 2:49 AM
A string of poetry pearls dear, Manmath! A seven
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