Life

Immersed in a painting,
No there's no escaping,
Depends what way you see it, 
Why would you even want to leave it? 

The possibilities excite me, 
It's the colour that ignites me,
Wondrous flow leading to what I don't know.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Agustin Avatar
October 15, 2024 at 7:07 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 11:59 PM
awesome poem. SKAT
A   Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 5:38 PM
Niamh, thank you for the reply ;) Happy Valentines to you..... XOX ~Love LINDA~
Dempsey Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 12:35 PM
Thank you, this is literally the third poem I've ever written a new found hobbie we shall see where it goes
A   Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 8:09 AM
Niamh, wonderful verse... LINDA
Dempsey Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 12:36 PM
Thank you so much!
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