Life

I was once sought to be cool in life 
but now I wish it was all my sight 
And now there is no light for me to follow 
So where will I go in life will I awake and this would all be gone 
Or will I stay asleep and fall in my own sorrow 
Will they be forgiven for there sins 
or will they grow and sill become a larger than life figure 
And begin to pound me into the ground
But it went all away when i awoke 
because I want to be just
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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January 15, 2016 at 4:16 PM
Hunter,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs.. SKAT
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January 19, 2016 at 11:35 AM
thanks Skat I am delighted to be your friend
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