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Life

                                     Life         
                          Peaceful, beautiful
                  Growing,   working,  arriving
              Love, abundance, scarcity, hatred
                     Aching , aging,decaying
                         Painful, sorrowful
                                   Death

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/24/2014 4:07:00 PM
Well written. Excellent poem that starts from life and ends in death. Fun in the middle. Best wishes Linda x
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Date: 2/25/2014 12:28:00 PM
Thank you Linda,your comment is delightful.
Date: 2/13/2014 7:03:00 PM
life is but a continuation of death well expressed hugs
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Date: 2/13/2014 10:06:00 PM
Thank you Shadow for the reading and commendation.Happy vals.
Date: 2/13/2014 3:16:00 PM
yep, that is life, and how well you took it into death!!
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Date: 2/13/2014 3:39:00 PM
Thank you for the reading and the commendation. Stay blessed Andrea.
Date: 2/13/2014 11:09:00 AM
These rather few words pervasively describe the process from beginning to end.
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Date: 2/13/2014 12:49:00 PM
Thank you for your reading and comment. Remain blessed Robert.
Date: 2/13/2014 9:00:00 AM
Great expressing the opposites between life and death..It is true that a person can be breathing but be dead..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 2/13/2014 12:46:00 PM
Immense thanks for your reading and comment. Stay blessed Sara.
Date: 2/13/2014 7:49:00 AM
There is much to ponder here. For me I feel that as I move towards death I am not sorrowful, I have gained so much along life's path, it is now in my early 50s that I have come to know peace and wisdom. I am now able to see the beauty around me and continue to grow into who I am.
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Date: 2/13/2014 12:41:00 PM
Thank you Richard for your reading and view ; divergent opinions is the essence of literary criticism,I am happy to have both the pros and con of this poem. Remain blessed Richard.
Date: 2/13/2014 5:00:00 AM
- Life captured in a beautiful "diamond",Kayod5 !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/13/2014 5:20:00 AM
Thank you for reading and adding value Anne,have a great day.
Date: 2/12/2014 9:59:00 PM
You have figured out the great aspects between love and hate as you produced their very essence within this poem! the difference between what is really within life and death! I really enjoyed reading the enormous grandiosity within this poem here this evening! What a fantastic piece, Great work!!
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Date: 2/12/2014 6:25:00 PM
So much said and pondered...and just the fourth line alone..wow...love and hate and much and little inbetween. The events that turn one to the other in life...I love this poem....
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Date: 2/12/2014 6:54:00 PM
Thank you Donna for your reading and appreciation; I truly feel actualised.
Date: 2/12/2014 12:25:00 PM
love the depth of these vivid thoughts that flow like life and death meeting each other...well penned, wow, kayods!.. huggs
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Date: 2/12/2014 4:50:00 PM
Thank you nette for the reading and commendation;remain blessed.
Date: 2/12/2014 7:59:00 AM
This is good my friend. I love the form too....Tim
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Date: 2/12/2014 8:15:00 AM
Thank you very much Tim.
Date: 2/12/2014 6:55:00 AM
That about sums it up. Nice write K. Steve
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Date: 2/12/2014 8:13:00 AM
Thank you steven for the reading and commendation.