Life

Life         
                          Peaceful, beautiful
                  Growing,   working,  arriving
              Love, abundance, scarcity, hatred
                     Aching , aging,decaying
                         Painful, sorrowful
                                   Death

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Linda Jackson

Date: 2/24/2014 4:07:00 PM

Well written. Excellent poem that starts from life and ends in death. Fun in the middle. Best wishes Linda x

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/25/2014 12:28:00 PM

Thank you Linda,your comment is delightful.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 2/13/2014 7:03:00 PM

life is but a continuation of death well expressed hugs

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/13/2014 10:06:00 PM

Thank you Shadow for the reading and commendation.Happy vals.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2014 3:16:00 PM

yep, that is life, and how well you took it into death!!

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/13/2014 3:39:00 PM

Thank you for the reading and the commendation. Stay blessed Andrea.

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/13/2014 11:09:00 AM

These rather few words pervasively describe the process from beginning to end.

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/13/2014 12:49:00 PM

Thank you for your reading and comment. Remain blessed Robert.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/13/2014 9:00:00 AM

Great expressing the opposites between life and death..It is true that a person can be breathing but be dead..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/13/2014 12:46:00 PM

Immense thanks for your reading and comment. Stay blessed Sara.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/13/2014 7:49:00 AM

There is much to ponder here. For me I feel that as I move towards death I am not sorrowful, I have gained so much along life's path, it is now in my early 50s that I have come to know peace and wisdom. I am now able to see the beauty around me and continue to grow into who I am.

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/13/2014 12:41:00 PM

Thank you Richard for your reading and view ; divergent opinions is the essence of literary criticism,I am happy to have both the pros and con of this poem. Remain blessed Richard.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/13/2014 5:00:00 AM

- Life captured in a beautiful "diamond",Kayod5 !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/13/2014 5:20:00 AM

Thank you for reading and adding value Anne,have a great day.

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/12/2014 9:59:00 PM

You have figured out the great aspects between love and hate as you produced their very essence within this poem! the difference between what is really within life and death! I really enjoyed reading the enormous grandiosity within this poem here this evening! What a fantastic piece, Great work!!

Donna Jones

Date: 2/12/2014 6:25:00 PM

So much said and pondered...and just the fourth line alone..wow...love and hate and much and little inbetween. The events that turn one to the other in life...I love this poem....

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/12/2014 6:54:00 PM

Thank you Donna for your reading and appreciation; I truly feel actualised.