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I don't know what to think, cuz trust me life can be really mean, It doesn't take it easy on you, Just because you don't know what to do, Life is hard to deal with, And it took me a long time to get it, But you still will never truly understand, But you just have to play your hand, Sometimes i feel like no matter what i do good or bad, Either way i feel damned, cuz i believe that before we got sent to earth god already knew our hand, He put people here to test us, And guess what, We big time messed up, and now the world as we know it is about to be done....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/2/2014 9:07:00 PM
Hi Jillian, alliteration is my 3rd favorite poetry form. About life, how sad we take it for granted. Sometimes I'm left without a thought when it comes to life.. , I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Jillian Werick
Date: 1/2/2014 9:12:00 PM
Thank you. You have no clue how much that means to me... And yes I will be sure to check out your contest...
Date: 1/2/2014 8:13:00 PM
Hi Jillian, very deep.... Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Jillian Werick
Date: 1/2/2014 9:17:00 PM
Well hi skat... You are sweet I ha e been writing poetry for about 9 years now and this is the first poem I have ever posted to any website ever because I didnt let people read them. But right before my daddy passed away he had been tellIing me that I had a gift and I shoukdshould do something with them so everything I put on here Is In memory of my precious daddy
Date: 1/2/2014 7:40:00 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Jillian ! - I like this, well written. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck !! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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