Life

Each person’s life is full of
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Written for Constance’s Creative Layouts contest, 16th August

lifefree verse

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2013 3:48:00 PM

Congratulations Jack...xox...Linda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/5/2013 1:15:00 PM

Congrats on your great win..Sara

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 9/2/2013 3:02:00 PM

hi Jack I love it congrats on your win Shadow x smiles

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/1/2013 2:18:00 PM

YAyyyy, you pulled out another shortie and I remember loving this one the first time I saw it as well. BIG congrats, my good friend.

Skat A

Date: 9/1/2013 1:44:00 PM

Hi Jack, , Congratulations on your awesome win....................... SKAT

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/31/2013 9:00:00 PM

we sure do but not all write creative...congrats on your win :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/19/2013 1:45:00 PM

A nice creative piece on this poem. Yes life does have it ups and downs. Lately seems more downs than ups. love phyl

Audrey Haick

Date: 8/19/2013 12:21:00 AM

: ) Wheter spu or snwod, with a friend like you around, life is still good! My glass is always half full, Jack. Best wishes for a win with this very creative one! x Annalise

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/17/2013 8:07:00 AM

Very creative work..Enjoyed reading it..Speaks of truths..Those ups can be good and those snwod can be bad...Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2013 10:27:00 PM

oh and thanks for seeing so many of my poems tonight. I know you don't get to soup as often as I do and I appreciate that you take time for your friends. Luv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2013 10:26:00 PM

hahaha. you are at it again, doing such short but clever little tricks for a contest. I love that mind of yours, my friend!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/16/2013 9:17:00 PM

You have been very creative in writing this superior write here my friend! I really enjoyed reading this excellent poem this evening! What a fabulous piece Jack, Quite the outstanding poem, Great Work!!