Life

Each person’s life is full of
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Written for Constance’s Creative Layouts contest, 16th August
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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September 5, 2013 at 3:48 PM
Congratulations Jack...xox...Linda
Kendrick Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 1:15 PM
Congrats on your great win..Sara
Hamilton Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 3:02 PM
hi Jack I love it congrats on your win Shadow x smiles
Dietrich Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 2:18 PM
YAyyyy, you pulled out another shortie and I remember loving this one the first time I saw it as well. BIG congrats, my good friend.
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September 1, 2013 at 1:44 PM
Hi Jack, , Congratulations on your awesome win....................... SKAT
Adams Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 9:00 PM
we sure do but not all write creative...congrats on your win :)
Babcock Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 1:45 PM
A nice creative piece on this poem. Yes life does have it ups and downs. Lately seems more downs than ups. love phyl
Haick Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 12:21 AM
: ) Wheter spu or snwod, with a friend like you around, life is still good! My glass is always half full, Jack. Best wishes for a win with this very creative one! x Annalise
Kendrick Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 8:07 AM
Very creative work..Enjoyed reading it..Speaks of truths..Those ups can be good and those snwod can be bad...Sara
Dietrich Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 10:27 PM
oh and thanks for seeing so many of my poems tonight. I know you don't get to soup as often as I do and I appreciate that you take time for your friends. Luv, Andrea
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August 16, 2013 at 10:26 PM
hahaha. you are at it again, doing such short but clever little tricks for a contest. I love that mind of yours, my friend!!!
Sivey Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 9:17 PM
You have been very creative in writing this superior write here my friend! I really enjoyed reading this excellent poem this evening! What a fabulous piece Jack, Quite the outstanding poem, Great Work!!
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August 16, 2013 at 3:05 PM
This is so cool and creative! I wish you more ups than downs Jack. Hugs
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August 16, 2013 at 2:54 PM
.....so true and well done,Jack! - Luck in contest! - Wishing you a relaxed and pleasant weekend!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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