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Life

Life.... Everyone sees it differently Some people take it for granted as if they deserve it To me life is like a plant.. In one part of our life we bloom, looking so beautiful But then some petals start to fall.... We start to fall... Life is as precious as gold... It holds the key to opportunity and joy Life is like a candle.... There's a matter of time before the candle melts and the flames die down... Each day is full of learning and comprehending What we want and what we need... LIFE IS...what we make of it.... LIFE...

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Date: 2/22/2012 6:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Petruce. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/20/2012 8:51:00 AM
I like your poem. Here is one of mine. Congrats on the selection. YOGI SAYS Life’s all ups-n-downs These states seem to be a fact If you are human What is the wise thing to do? When you’re not down be UP!
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Date: 2/20/2012 6:56:00 AM
This is very true, great read. Thanks for sharing :)
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Date: 2/20/2012 12:34:00 AM
Petruce, very creative. I really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing it. Congrats on having your work featured by Poetry Soup this week..........S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 1/26/2012 3:31:00 PM
This is a great poem and you broke down life the way it really is Martica Hurd
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