Petruce Jean Charles Poet Verse

Life

Life....
Everyone sees it differently
Some people take it for granted as if they deserve it
To me life is like a plant..
In one part of our life we bloom, looking so beautiful
But then some petals start to fall....
We start to fall...
Life is as precious as gold...
It holds the key to opportunity and joy
Life is like a candle....
There's a matter of time before the candle melts and the flames die down...
Each day is full of learning and comprehending
What we want and what we need...
LIFE IS...what we make of it....
LIFE...

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Carol Sunshine Brown February 22, 2012 at 6:21 AM Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Petruce. Love, Carol

Daver Austin February 20, 2012 at 8:51 AM I like your poem. Here is one of mine. Congrats on the selection. YOGI SAYS Life’s all ups-n-downs These states seem to be a fact If you are human What is the wise thing to do? When you’re not down be UP!

Taylor Thompson February 20, 2012 at 6:56 AM This is very true, great read. Thanks for sharing :)

Samual Ronthorpe February 20, 2012 at 12:34 AM Petruce, very creative. I really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing it. Congrats on having your work featured by Poetry Soup this week..........S.Ronthorpe

Martica Hurd January 26, 2012 at 3:31 PM This is a great poem and you broke down life the way it really is Martica Hurd