Life

LIFE life so apparent just a common breath of air it has been given from the big bang and upward charged with the mission to think

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/21/2011 5:17:00 PM

Life,, what an interesting concept.. Hi Daver.. its been a long time..this is a nice way to come back and read here at the soup... Very nice... glad im here snooping and posting... hope today inspires me to come back... had sadness in my family... but im better now... take care.. always p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/14/2011 10:03:00 AM

Daver, I will not forget Korea. My late husband was a Korean veteran. The military helped with the funeral, his hospitalization and gave a stunning tribute to him after he died. Love, Carolyn

Date: 4/13/2011 6:26:00 PM

And this is a thought provoking poem. Creative format. Thank you for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2011 10:08:00 PM

wow, that last line put it all in perspective. too bad so few know how to think these days. You be the man of wisdom, Daver.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/12/2011 5:40:00 PM

Life nicely expressed and explained, daver

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/12/2011 5:09:00 PM

Very profound, Daver. We have only one mission and yet so often we fail to "think" about our approach to life. Awesome tanka, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/12/2011 1:08:00 PM

We sometimes forget it is a gift Daver, enjoyed this tonight.. hope your week will be a great one, love Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/12/2011 1:06:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your outstanding poetry today Daver. Wishing you a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

James Foulk

Date: 4/12/2011 1:03:00 PM

a great write dave, so creative and warm. thank you for reading Made In Heaven and for your comment.

James Peranteau

Date: 4/12/2011 11:35:00 AM

Oh, you've got me thinking dear poet ! What a write, I'll be meditating on this one for sure, all day Dave ! Have a wonderful week my friend....much love, james

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/12/2011 8:58:00 AM

Wonderful way to express Life Dave and it is so apparent your poetry is super dynamic my friend.. awesome intake and emotion in every line.. luv..