Life

Life is like a cluster of weeds
It keeps tangling on and on
Some-times it unwinds 
Because of a twist in fate
At-times is washed away
Due to un-fateful days!

We must try to make life
A blend of love and harmony
Happiness and sorrow
Peace which keeps
Mixing into tomorrow

Only then will we be able to
Face every tomorrow with 
A light heart and can then
Be able to face each 
Disappointment with a
Sweet disregard!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Laan Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 6:03 AM
Great way of explaining life, love it.
Neels Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 5:30 AM
Seema I love your message in this write, especially your third verse :) Wilma
Bagnall Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 5:05 AM
Nice, I like the analogy in the first line, think you need to carry it through the 2nd & 3rd verses too. 3rd verse is great. Well done
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