Life

life Life what a bleep! Then you die. Like, John Doe! Like, Jane Doe

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Skat A

Date: 1/30/2014 4:17:00 AM

lol, life is a good. then we die, Skat

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/11/2013 2:11:00 AM

ok, this is too funny. had to read again and again......

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/11/2013 2:06:00 AM

one of my faves

Cherl Dunn

Date: 1/22/2013 5:47:00 PM

Very interesting write. cheri dunn

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/10/2012 8:37:00 AM

it is the bits in between SandyIvy that got me... love your poem....

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 6/16/2012 4:50:00 PM

LOL, CONGRATULATIONS,Few words with much potency and volume!!!!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/26/2012 4:42:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Ralph Taylor

Date: 5/23/2012 7:45:00 PM

Congrats on your win, SandyIvy. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/23/2012 6:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "SHHHH" contest SandyIvy. Love, Carol

Prince Ekpemandu

Date: 5/23/2012 3:04:00 AM

Congrats on your win in the "shhh" contest

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/22/2012 9:34:00 PM

Sandy ,,Congratulations for your awesome entry in my shh!! and poem of the week contest...thank you for supporting my contest. Have yourself a wonderful and enjoyable day :-) PD

David Williams

Date: 5/22/2012 2:20:00 PM

Sandy congrats on your win..David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/10/2012 2:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week SandyIvy. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/10/2012 12:20:00 PM

Congratulations on featured poem, Sandy. Short and to the point, but well said.

John Rhinem

Date: 5/9/2012 4:39:00 AM

...."Congratulations, Upon This Amazing Poem Being Featured This Week At PoeSoup, 'My Beautiful Woman.'" * Love, John!:) ˜

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 4/24/2012 10:42:00 AM

not so much for the beginning and the end but what you do in between. Gotta enjoy every freakin' moment

Charles Henderson

Date: 7/13/2011 10:00:00 AM

Sandy, thanx for the comment on my poem. I read all yours here. I think with your wit and natural sarchasm you would be good at Grook poetry. You should research it a little on line and try your hand at it. If you do, send me a blurb so I can see results. Charles

Oluwanifise Moses

Date: 7/11/2011 9:07:00 PM

very nice: short and witty

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/27/2011 12:24:00 AM

Yes in the end, we become strangers to the earth again. I enjoyed seeing this one tonight.

Susan Palli

Date: 12/9/2010 10:00:00 AM

good one! God will remember them and resurrect them. (John 5:28,29)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/4/2010 9:20:00 AM

i am with Nette, thousands words.. enjoyed,..p.d.

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 12/3/2010 11:09:00 PM

Hi Sid.Yes it's true but hopefully we get as much out of it before we go.And put plenty into it.This is short and to the point.But I feel you have a wry sense of humour and hopefully more-no pun intended-to give.This is cynical ,yes but I like it.Keep writing.Luv June(Sylvia)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/3/2010 3:35:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sid. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

Date: 12/2/2010 6:50:00 PM

Hi Sid, short, sweet, and full of a thousand thoughts! well done... Lay

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/2/2010 4:40:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your take on life in your poem but life is what u make it luv.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing.. with luv..