Life

life

Life what a bleep!
Then you die.
Like, John Doe!
Like, Jane Doe
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January 30, 2014 at 4:17 AM
lol, life is a good. then we die, Skat
A   Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 2:11 AM
ok, this is too funny. had to read again and again......
A   Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 2:06 AM
one of my faves
Dunn Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 5:47 PM
Very interesting write. cheri dunn
Horsman Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 8:37 AM
it is the bits in between SandyIvy that got me... love your poem....
The Drunken Poet Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 4:50 PM
LOL, CONGRATULATIONS,Few words with much potency and volume!!!!!
Kendrick Avatar
May 26, 2012 at 4:42 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Taylor Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 7:45 PM
Congrats on your win, SandyIvy. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph
Brown Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 6:44 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "SHHHH" contest SandyIvy. Love, Carol
Ekpemandu Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 3:04 AM
Congrats on your win in the "shhh" contest
A   Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 9:34 PM
Sandy ,,Congratulations for your awesome entry in my shh!! and poem of the week contest...thank you for supporting my contest. Have yourself a wonderful and enjoyable day :-) PD
Williams Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 2:20 PM
Sandy congrats on your win..David
Brown Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 2:14 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week SandyIvy. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 12:20 PM
Congratulations on featured poem, Sandy. Short and to the point, but well said.
Rhinem Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 4:39 AM
...."Congratulations, Upon This Amazing Poem Being Featured This Week At PoeSoup, 'My Beautiful Woman.'" * Love, John!:) ˜
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
April 24, 2012 at 10:42 AM
not so much for the beginning and the end but what you do in between. Gotta enjoy every freakin' moment
Henderson Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 10:00 AM
Sandy, thanx for the comment on my poem. I read all yours here. I think with your wit and natural sarchasm you would be good at Grook poetry. You should research it a little on line and try your hand at it. If you do, send me a blurb so I can see results. Charles
Moses Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 9:07 PM
very nice: short and witty
Dietrich Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 12:24 AM
Yes in the end, we become strangers to the earth again. I enjoyed seeing this one tonight.
Palli Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 10:00 AM
good one! God will remember them and resurrect them. (John 5:28,29)
A   Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 9:20 AM
i am with Nette, thousands words.. enjoyed,..p.d.
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December 3, 2010 at 11:09 PM
Hi Sid.Yes it's true but hopefully we get as much out of it before we go.And put plenty into it.This is short and to the point.But I feel you have a wry sense of humour and hopefully more-no pun intended-to give.This is cynical ,yes but I like it.Keep writing.Luv June(Sylvia)
Brown Avatar
December 3, 2010 at 3:35 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sid. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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December 2, 2010 at 6:50 PM
Hi Sid, short, sweet, and full of a thousand thoughts! well done... Lay
Sweetheart Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 4:40 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your take on life in your poem but life is what u make it luv.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing.. with luv..
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