Life

life

on this merry-go-round that spins constantly
life is just a blur as it spins seven days a week
I just want to jump off for a while to get a peek
to see what the world is really all about
life just runs together when I'm spinning to fast
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 9:08 PM
love it. love it!! Thanks for commenting on so many of my poems today, marie. let me see a bunch of yours now before I go off for the night!
Brown Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 3:33 PM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Marie. I hope you plan on being here and writing for years to come. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today. Wishing you the best always. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 5:06 AM
We all feel that way sometimes when we are overbooked on our calenders...We let life control us instead of us controlling our lives..This is a great write on very relevent modern day topic..Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for faithfully stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 8:57 PM
Life as a merry go round is a perfect depiction of today's world.. rushing to hurry up and wait..haha.. nice one Marie.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"...
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