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Life

Life is what you make it And not how you take it It's like a roller coaster going up and down and all around I can't explain it The trials and tribulations that we go through But with our faith and strength in God There's nothing that we can't do Whether we are rich or poor Black or white, educated or under rated Successful or a non achiever Life will be the same But if we don't succeed We'll be the ones to blame Time waits for no one And life passes us by each day So make the best out of what you may Don't be afraid to challenge yourself Through your struggles Many will see Just how wonderful your journey in life shall be

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/21/2009 7:24:00 PM
There are many wonderful sentiments in this piece. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks, Kim
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Date: 10/12/2009 1:45:00 PM
With God and faith all things are possible. So much truth in your words. Blessings to you for sharing this inspirational view with us. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 10/6/2009 12:33:00 PM
nicely penned
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Date: 10/5/2009 10:18:00 AM
Very inspirational. Thank you for the boost my morning needed!! ~KC~
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Date: 10/5/2009 9:55:00 AM
I like the mountain top experiences but I have gotten lots of valleys in my life. The valleys are the teachers. I like the way that you handled the subject matter. Keep writing.Sara
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Date: 10/5/2009 9:44:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Donielle. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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