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I was thinking how distracted we all are by materialism. How we always look 'out there' for answers: life, God, meaning, when we have them all within us all the time. I was thinking how we try to delay aging, constantly dieting, popping fat burning pills. And the stuff we collect is obscene! How often do we stop to breathe, look within and truly listen. All that led me to try and write again. It's  been a while so not my best work, but written from the heart nevertheless. 

Behind the scars and the bumps and bends Lies wisdom. In the lines and the aches and pains Is etched ‘experience’. We live in this body for a while. incarnate, living in physicality, in duality with the spirit deep within, and while discernment grows, the chassis rusts and eventually it turns to dust - it was only borrowed after all. Physical being is to finite as the soul is to infinity. So in the quest to seek eternal youth, be circumspect and don’t forget the truth. Nurture the soul instead, listen to its voice. Search within and don’t be distracted by the lure of materialism. Hoard acumen, poise, prudence, and grow in understanding. Don’t get choked by the weeds of greed. We are only a short time here, make it count.

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Date: 3/3/2025 1:19:00 AM
Nice poem. So real and profound. I love the realism and thought provoking words. Thanks for sharing
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Date: 2/13/2025 5:54:00 AM
Well said. It is easy to get caught up in all the "stuff" and forget what really counts. The book of Eclesiastés labels it as a chasing after the wind. Great poem
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Helen J Radford
Date: 2/13/2025 5:57:00 AM
Thank you Oliver. Yes indeed. I appreciate your appreciation ????

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