life

the flower that blooms in the morning loses its senses in the twilight before the stars catch sight it gives up its breath...

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Beata Agustin

Date: 6/24/2024 3:08:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed. (Just clarifying: losts or loses?)

DIMPY MUNDRA
Date: 6/25/2024 1:20:00 AM

hey , many thanks for welcoming me...n yaa it's loses , i think i have to edit...