Life

A wondrous set of accords for all life's concerns and resolve, Lasaad. Seems yours is much the trend of fellow soupers and not to tread like mine, yikes. GL on this special day for me, and Aloha, William

A short and deep thoughtful poem.

You have pinned life to its essentials- success over stress, fulfilling dreams and evolving trust and delight with soul remaining most powerful. Confining to four lines, you have defined life at its best. All the Best.

Your excellent poem should be read daily as an opening verse by high school children as they start class. So important are you eloquent words chosen Lasaad, that it would be a wonderful way for them to start their day. a superb write my dear friend - kudos. Blessings and kind thoughts from across the pond. Jennifer.

Short but powerful. Great rhymes and splendid allusions to the cosmic beauty. Best for a win.

Wow what a beautiful acrostic for life dr sotto! Your use of nature to depict life with rhymes and brilliant imagery is what makes this stand out for me! I especially love “ Inviting the moon, even if missed, leads to stars Filling a dream, the soul is stronger than all else” brilliant! Just so deeply moving and soulfully poetic! Pleasure reading this! Best wishes for the contest! Youv done an excellent job in my eyes!

Hello Soto, oh, this is wonderful. My fav. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

- Yes, truth in your lines Las - Great written :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs