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The Life Acrostic Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Matt Caliri 04/18/2024

Life

Let the wind blow the sails while the waves hit hard.
Imagine yourself on your dream boat on the ocean.
Feel the breeze that every day caresses your body.
Enjoy every second, embrace that moment as the last one.
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Rodgers Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 5:01 AM
Dear Maria, your poem swept me away on a journey across the open sea. Imagining myself on my dream boat, feeling the gentle breeze and the relentless push of the waves, your words brought the ocean to life. They tell me to savor each moment, to embrace the adventure with open arms, and to find beauty even amidst the challenges. I know to cherish every second as if it were the last. - Blessings, Daniel
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 5:48 AM
Thank you very much Daniel. I appreciate your comment. Blessings!
Rose  Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 4:09 AM
As I read this I realize you have created none else but perfection and utter beauty, the photo is exquisite Maria, so are your words. Enjoyed your poem, much love, :)
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 5:49 AM
Thanks a lot Mystic Rose for passing by and leaving your kind words. Hugs/María
Kendrick Avatar
April 21, 2024 at 2:05 PM
Ahh!! Very poetic lines penned in this one. I am glad I got to read it today. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara K
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 12:50 AM
Thank you very much dear Sara. I hope you have a lovely week. Blessings!
Rolland Avatar
April 21, 2024 at 1:06 AM
great poetry, to have be.tter days and easier thanks poet
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
April 21, 2024 at 1:27 AM
Thanks to you Yann. Have a nice Sunday!
Goldsmith Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 11:13 AM
Your "Life" is a wonderful Acrostic write/cute picture. "Good Luck" Looks like we both did this one...  Have a blessed weekend writing away....................
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 12:21 PM
Thank you for everything dear Paula.
Bowring Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 9:40 AM
My dear sweet friend, such a beautiful acrostic. I love the imagery here and also the poignant message within its lines. Much is expressed within your well written lines and the picture is perfect too. We should ‘live in the moment’ and cherish each one. Good luck in the contest. I loved it! Have a wonderful weekend dear Maria. Many blessings and hugs to you xx
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 10:02 AM
Good evening my dear Christina. Thank you for your kind message. I hope you have a nice weekend. Hugs/María
Buhagiar Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 1:00 AM
To live on the open sea, smell the salty waters and float happily. Delicious poem, dear Maria. Hugs.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 1:46 AM
My dear friend, Thank you so much. Enjoy your day. Blessings!
Poet Avatar
April 18, 2024 at 8:26 PM
Dear Maria, the subtle message of savoring the present moment is beautifully conveyed by this acrostic. The beauty you conveyed in a few sentences is truly remarkable. Good luck in the contest.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
April 18, 2024 at 11:57 PM
Thank you very much for the visit and the lovely comment. Have a great day Sotto!
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