Life

He hated airports

Hated the check-ins

The waiting

The food

Hated the boarding pleasantries

Really hated children sitting beside him

Women, men

Hated flying

Hated anything he couldn’t control

Hated the final destination

Dollars in passport

Hated the drive

The uncertainty

No protection

Hated thinking back

Life in general

His failings

Hated civilians

Mortgage, talk

Kids, relationships

Memories

Finally

The briefing

The nod to old friends

The familiar touch of metal

He surveyed his surroundings

The task ahead

The ultimate failure of his life

Life itself.

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Date: 3/21/2024 9:00:00 AM
What a heart tragedy. I'm sorry to read such anger in all aspects of his life. I hope he rests in peace within heaven's arms. Blessings. Chantelle
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Paul Bell
Date: 3/21/2024 9:33:00 AM
I'm sure he's at rest, some can't conform to suburbia.
Date: 2/11/2024 6:12:00 AM
Be positive. Negativity is not life. Blessings.
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Paul Bell
Date: 2/11/2024 6:27:00 AM
He did die in the jungle.
Date: 2/10/2024 2:38:00 PM
Not a people lover for sure and the poor soul has a heap of negativity. love phyl
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Paul Bell
Date: 2/11/2024 2:01:00 AM
Wasn't a happy guy.
Date: 1/26/2024 7:01:00 AM
This is very well penned Paul as this poor soul is swimming in the stagnant pool of his own negativity. God help him find some thing in life to lift him out of his myopia syndrome.
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Paul Bell
Date: 1/26/2024 10:48:00 AM
Died in the jungle. lol
Date: 1/18/2024 7:45:00 PM
God help him~~and all the miserable people he symbolizes! Very expressive and descriptive, Paul! Janice
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Paul Bell
Date: 1/19/2024 8:47:00 AM
Some just don't like people. lol
Date: 1/15/2024 2:23:00 PM
in other words, he's a miserable git lol
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Paul Bell
Date: 1/16/2024 2:22:00 AM
Maybe change bush to jungle. lol
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Paul Bell
Date: 1/16/2024 2:21:00 AM
C,mon the guy died in the bush.
Date: 1/14/2024 4:37:00 AM
You poem conveys a strong sense of dislike and frustration. The repetition of the word "hated" emphasizes the intensity of the emotions felt by you.. This creates a raw and unfiltered expression of personal discontent... Nicely done..
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Paul Bell
Date: 1/15/2024 2:23:00 AM
A guy lost in the world.
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