Life

Girls take it serious
Boys goof around, they act like 2-year olds
Stomp all around, laughing things that aren’t that funny,
Not taking life seriously
They laugh and poke fun not knowing
How they will soon be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Adeite Avatar
June 6, 2009 at 6:16 AM
Funny though, yet it’s a fact to you. Hope it’s not your Bf that provoked your pen. I love this well written piece. Keep writing. You are great. change the poetry form to free verse, it'snot iI do not know
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June 5, 2009 at 7:33 PM
This is often the case, Rhonda, but the boys finally do grow up and sometimes wonder why they acted "like 2-year olds." It's often said that women mature faster, and I guess that's true for most. Very nice poem! Love, Carolyn
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